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2020-04-08 TRAFFIC-SP REVIEW 1 April 08, 2020 Mark Rogers TRG Land 898 Production Pl Newport Beach, CA 92663 mrogers@trgland.com SUBJECT: 3RD DESIGN REVIEW – TRAFFIC STUDY 4th DESIGN REVIEW – SPECIFIC PLAN TRAVERTINE CORPORATION TRUST ACCOUNT STATUS GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0002, ZONE CHANGE 2017-0002, SPECIFIC PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0004, TENTATIVE TRACT MAP 2017-0008, ENVIRONMENTAL ASSESSMENT 2017-0008 Dear Mr. Rogers: City staff has reviewed the 3rd submittal of the Traffic Study/Phasing Analysis and the 4th submittal of the Specific Plan. Comments are provided in the documents and have been uploaded into the eTrakit portal as follows: • Specific Plan comments are provided in the documents located in the SP2017-0004 case attachments and are labelled by section: o 4th REVIEW CORRECTIONS-SP CH 1 o 4th REVIEW CORRECTIONS-SP CH 2 o 4th REVIEW CORRECTIONS-SP CH 3 o 4th REVIEW CORRECTIONS-SP CH 4 o 4th REVIEW CORRECTIONS-SP CH 5 • Traffic Study comments are provided in the document located in the TTM2017-0008 case attachments and is labelled 3rd Review Corrections - Traffic Study 4-8-20. Please check these comments, revise documents and resubmit. Please note that the Traffic Study is currently being reviewed by Riverside County’s traffic engineer and comments from them will be forthcoming. 2 TRAVERTINE CORPORATION TRUST ACCOUNT STATUS Additionally, we wanted to give you an update on the trust account balance and project hours bank for the project. Initially, $61,223 was deposited into the Travertine Corporation trust account with the City. When applications were first submitted, in September 2017, the fees for the above-mentioned applications in the amount of $30,881, was withdrawn from the trust account. To date, $7,653.75 has been expended for the peer review, leaving a remaining balance of $22,688.25 in the trust account. When the applications were submitted, a bank of 198.15 hours was created for staff to review the project. At this time, that bank has 37% remaining and staff anticipates it to be quickly depleted with the next set of submittals. Once the bank has been depleted, staff can no longer review the project applications until another deposit is received. Staff can add to the bank using funds in the trust account that are being used for the peer review; however, once the funds for the peer review are depleted, you will be asked to provide another deposit. If you have any questions, please contact me at (760) 777-7067. Sincerely, Cheri L. Flores Planning Manager Design and Development Department cc. Lou Miramontes, Hofmann Land Development Company Danny Castro, Design and Development Director 191114_Section 1-City Edits Main document changes and comments Page 1-1: Commented [CF1] Cheri Flores 7/30/2019 11:22:00 AM Make sure all indentations are consistent throughout the entire document. Page 1-1: Commented [AC2R1] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 10:01:00 AM fixed Page 1-1: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 2/27/2019 3:33:00 PM Specific Plan should always be capitalized. Note in corrections below that first usage is Specific Plan Amendment, and that thereafter, only Amendment should be used when referencing the current document. Some sections reference Amendment 1 and some just Amendment. Pick one and use consistently. Please check throughout. Page 1-1: Commented [AC4R3] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 2:14:00 PM Specific Plan has been capitalized and replaced with Specific Plan Amendment. All future mentions of this document are referred as Amendment Page 1-1: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:16:00 PM Please insert the Purpose and Authority sections from Section 2. Also identify the regulations that allow SP, ie government code and municipal codes from Section 2. Once the information from Section 2 is incorporated into Section 1 please delete Section 2 Also include summary of the sections, ie. Section 1 does this, Section 2 does this, etc. Also please include a brief summary that states that this is an amendment to the original specific plan and reduces project area from original. Page 1-1: Commented [AC6R5] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 1:14:00 PM Text added Page 1-1: Commented [CF7] Cheri Flores 4/5/2019 8:58:00 AM Specific Plans are adopted by Resolution. Page 1-1: Commented [AC8R7] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 3:16:00 PM What would be the adoption process for an Amendment? 9.240.010 Specific plan review. Uses the word adopted? Is this correct to use and reference? Page 1-1: Commented [CF9R7] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 2:50:00 PM Adopt is the correct word. Page 1-1: Commented [AC10R7] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 9:09:00 AM accepted Page 1-2: Commented [CF11] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:18:00 PM Move this entire paragraph to the phasing section. Page 1-2: Commented [AC12R11] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 10:36:00 AM Moved Page 1-3: Commented [CF13] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:04:00 PM Check all exhibit numbers throughout. Some exhibits that were previously in this section may not be needed anymore due to text removal, ie. Geology and hydrology related exhibits. Page 1-3: Commented [AC14R13] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:54:00 PM Updated Page 1-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:35:00 AM 1 mile  Page 1-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:35:00 AM 1-mile  Page 1-3: Commented [CF15] Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:30:00 AM No hyphen needed here. Page 1-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:36:00 AM ( Page 1-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:23:00 PM 4 Page 1-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:23:00 PM 5 Page 1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:24:00 AM and Table 1 Page 1-4: Commented [CF16] Cheri Flores 2/27/2019 3:39:00 PM Move these after the project description Page 1-4: Commented [AC17R16] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 10:41:00 AM Moved Page 1-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:35:00 PM 6 Page 1-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:35:00 PM 8 Page 1-4: Commented [CF18] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:21:00 PM Please define what the pattern of organization pertains to. Organization of what? Page 1-4: Commented [AC19R18] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 2:37:00 PM The pattern of the organization pertains to the physical design of the project Page 1-4: Commented [CF20] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:22:00 PM These seem to reflect CEQA checklist items and copied GP goals. What are the project’s goals? Page 1-4: Commented [AC21R20] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 10:41:00 AM Updated Page 1-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 2:12:00 PM 1. Enhance the existing Boo Hoff trail system by adding a staging area at the northernly point of the project with parking area and access from the proposed extension of Jefferson. 2. Provide an interpretive trail element that circumnavigates the project and identifies the unique features both historical and current within the project setting. 3. To focus the activities for the community on walking and hiking as well as providing a major recreational facility along the eastern edge of the project Page 1-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 10:40:00 AM . 1. Page 1-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 10:39:00 AM . 1. Page 1-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 10:45:00 AM 1. Establish a distinctive community character through place-making elements that embrace and respect the site’s special physical attributes, as well as authentic architecture that reflects local heritage. 1. Page 1-5: Commented [NC22] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 3:01:00 PM Please Define. Is a visitor a resident’s guest, or is the course going to be public? Page 1-5: Commented [AC23R22] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 2:41:00 PM It will be public, has been revised. Page 1-5: Commented [CF24] Cheri Flores 3/29/2019 3:12:00 PM With the possible exception of topography, which informs the land plan, all this should be summarized into one short paragraph that says: 1. Environmental issused of concerned included…(list). 1. These issued were studied in an EIR (include SCH #) certified by the City in ?. 1. The Amendment has been designed to address environmental concerns through project features, including….(short list of things like the master flood control system, the lands designated OS, etc.) Page 1-5: Commented [AC25R24] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:07:00 PM Added/Revised Page 1-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:04:00 PM 1.6 Environmental Conditions The site lies on an alluvial fan made up of material deposited by drainages emanating from the Santa Rosa Mountains. The Travertine property is comprised of broad, gently sloping terrain that is typical of the western portions of the Coachella Valley. The vegetation which presently occupies the project site can be characterized as a sparse desert biotic community. The native plant life found on upland portions of the site is comprised primarily of Creosote Bush, White Bursage, and Mesquite. A cultivated vineyard once occupied most of the northern portion of the project site, but has been abandoned since 2007. None of the flora is considered significant. Archaeology and paleontology were evaluated during the initial CEQA process and subsequent certified final EIR, SCH 1994112047, and again during the EA process in 2006. As a result, the site was designed and planned to avoid those areas that were found to have cultural and paleontological sensitivity. Several mitigation measures were adopted that will be applied during the construction phase of the project to monitor for any buried deposits. Further technical studies are being prepared for the EIR in conjunction with this Specific Plan. Page 1-5: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:06:00 PM Line spacing: Multiple 1.15 li Page 1-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:11:00 PM Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/7/2019 9:11:00 AM preliminary Page 1-6: Commented [NC26] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 3:15:00 PM Add footnote; reference specific document or correspondence. Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 12:59:00 PM , Travertine Development Preliminary Hydraulic Modeling Results, Project No. ST0143 Page 1-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:00:00 PM Page 1-6: Commented [AC27R26] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:00:00 PM To be added Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:00:00 PM , Page 1-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:00:00 PM , Page 1-6: Commented [CF28R26] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:09:00 PM Please be sure to add citation. Page 1-6: Commented [AC29R26] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:27:00 PM added Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:00:00 PM Page 1-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:22:00 AM Currently, the project is processing the 2nd round of review by CVWD for a hydraulic model. Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:12:00 PM Currently, the project is processing the 2nd round of review by CVWD for a hydraulic model. Page 1-6: Commented [CF30] Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:31:00 AM Remove this statement. Not necessary here. Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/7/2019 9:12:00 AM and provide rights-of-way and easements for any electrical infrastructure needed to serve the project Page 1-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:57:00 PM will be located Page 1-6: Commented [CF31] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:10:00 PM 13 kv what? Please say what you are referring to, lines or power, etc. Page 1-6: Commented [AC32R31] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 2:26:00 PM ADDED Page 1-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/7/2019 9:13:00 AM transmission lines to the site Page 1-6: Commented [NC33] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 3:19:00 PM Reference SP section and subsection where these standards are described. Page 1-6: Commented [AC34R33] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:01:00 PM ADDED Page 1-6: Commented [NC35] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 3:20:00 PM Where does it occur now? Page 1-6: Commented [AC36R35] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:00:00 PM ADDED Page 1-7: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:34:00 AM and Green Page 1-7: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:55:00 AM s Page 1-7: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:55:00 AM 8 and 95-3 Page 1-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:24:00 PM . Page 1-7: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:24:00 PM .13 Page 1-7: Commented [CF37] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:01:00 PM Renumber exhibit Page 1-7: Commented [AC38R37] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:55:00 PM Updated Page 1-8: Commented [NC39] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 3:29:00 PM Add footnote. Cite specific document or correspondence. Page 1-8: Commented [CF40R39] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:12:00 PM Please don’t forget to provide citation. Page 1-8: Commented [AC41R39] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:31:00 PM added Page 1-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:27:00 PM Page 1-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:27:00 PM Fish and Wildlife ERIV – 2735.3) Page 1-8: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:06:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.25" Page 1-8: Commented [CF42] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:12:00 PM Not sure why this is highlighted, please resolve this. 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Page 1-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:07:00 PM Page 1-9: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:07:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman, 12 pt, Bold Page 1-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:07:00 PM Page 1-9: Formatted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:24:00 AM Indent: Left: 0.5", No bullets or numbering Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:38:00 AM 8 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:38:00 AM 7 Page 1-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:44:00 AM 7 Page 1-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:24:00 PM 9 Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:38:00 AM 9 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:38:00 AM 8 Page 1-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:44:00 AM 8 Page 1-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:24:00 PM 11 Page 1-10: Commented [CF46] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:01:00 PM Renumber exhibits based on text changes, removals and additions Page 1-10: Commented [AC47R46] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:56:00 PM updated Page 1-10: Commented [NC48] Nicole Criste 3/29/2019 4:00:00 PM Correct throughout Page 1-10: Commented [AC49R48] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 3:48:00 PM Updated Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:50:00 AM 08-113 Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:50:00 AM 2017-0002 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:50:00 AM 08-133 Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:50:00 AM 2017-0002 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:39:00 AM 910 Page 1-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:44:00 AM 9 Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:39:00 AM 10 Page 1-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:24:00 PM 12 Page 1-10: Commented [CF50] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:07:00 PM Check exhibit numbers Page 1-10: Commented [AC51R50] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:56:00 PM updated Page 1-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:45:00 AM 1 Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:39:00 AM 1 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:39:00 AM 0 Page 1-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:45:00 AM 0 Page 1-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:56:00 AM . Page 1-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 9:37:00 AM Header and footer changes Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes 191114_Section 2-City Edits Main document changes and comments Page 2-1: Commented [CF1] Cheri Flores 7/30/2019 11:02:00 AM Let’s use Exhibit 2.2 for the land use plan, rename it Exhibit 2.1 and remove Exhibit 2.1. They are both basically the same. You can put the acreages on Exhibit 2.2. Please be sure to cite the lot configuration exhibits in their respective sections. Page 2-1: Commented [AC2R1] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:52:00 PM TO BE UPDATED Page 2-1: Commented [CF3R1] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:26:00 AM Comment stands. Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:09:00 AM and 2.2 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 2 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 3 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:33:00 PM 2 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:42:00 PM 3 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:11:00 AM 388.1 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:14:00 AM 380.4 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:15:00 AM 44.3 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:15:00 AM 43.4 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:11:00 AM 96.4 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:11:00 AM 84.1 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:16:00 AM 11.0 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:16:00 AM 9.6 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:10:00 AM 2.5 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:10:00 AM 5.1 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:16:00 AM 4.0 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:16:00 AM 3.7 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:14:00 AM 357 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:14:00 AM 379 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:14:00 AM 0 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:14:00 AM 4 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:17:00 AM 0.8 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:17:00 AM 3.3 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:21:00 AM 6 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:21:00 AM 7 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:03:00 AM Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 1:54:00 PM 6 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 1:54:00 PM 8 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:51:00 PM 2.1.1 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:42:00 PM 380 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:42:00 PM 379- Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:42:00 PM .3 Page 2-1: Commented [CF4] Cheri Flores 1/10/2020 3:23:00 PM Is it 379 or 380? Above is cited as 380, please remain consistent. Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:43:00 PM 6.5 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:43:00 PM 8 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM - Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:21:00 PM Restricted Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:21:00 PM Natural Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM 2.5 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:43:00 PM 3 Page 2-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM - Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM Page 2-2: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM This exhibit does not show trails. They aren’t shown until Exhibit 3.12. If you want to reference them here, please use an exhibit showing the trails and staging areas. Page 2-2: Commented [CF6] Cheri Flores 3/29/2019 4:03:00 PM Show where these are on the map, reference the map here Page 2-2: Commented [AC7R6] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:11:00 PM Updated Page 2-2: Commented [CF8R6] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM These are not shown on Exhibit 2.2-see comment above Page 2-2: Commented [CF9] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM This exhibit does not show trails. See comment above Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:22:00 PM 43.4 Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:22:00 PM 45 Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 2.0 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 1.6 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 7 Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 8 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 9 Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:17:00 PM 0 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:16:00 AM  Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:16:00 AM  Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:16:00 AM  Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:16:00 AM  Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:17:00 AM  For lot configuration see Exhibit 2.3 for estate and luxury Page 2-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:06:00 PM single family detached Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:26:00 AM Page 2-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:06:00 PM ( Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:26:00 AM SFD Page 2-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:06:00 PM ) Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:26:00 AM Page 2-2: Commented [CF10] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:06:00 PM Define this term Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:26:00 AM lot configurations, Exhibit 2.4 for large and mid SFD lot configurations and Exhibit 2.5 for small SFD and single family attached units lot configurations. Page 2-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:30:00 AM Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:18:00 PM 40 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:44:00 PM 38.2 Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:18:00 PM 32 Page 2-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:18:00 PM 122- Page 2-2: Commented [CF11] Cheri Flores 1/10/2020 3:24:00 PM Will there be any other uses since it expanded to 122 acres? If so, please list them. Page 2-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:03:00 AM Page 2-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:09:00 PM 2 Page 2-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:09:00 PM 1 Page 2-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:31:00 AM 3 Page 2-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:31:00 AM 4 Page 2-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:31:00 AM 3 Page 2-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:31:00 AM 4 Page 2-3: Commented [CF12] Cheri Flores 4/10/2019 8:17:00 AM The explanation is on the next page, not in section 6. Please put discussion in Section 6 and then the reference for section 6 is good here. Page 2-3: Commented [AC13R12] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:21:00 PM Updated Text in Section 6 (Now 5 after 1 ch+2ch) Page 2-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:45:00 PM 5 Page 2-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:45:00 PM 1 Page 2-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 3 Page 2-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 4 Page 2-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:09:00 PM 2 Page 2-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:09:00 PM 1 Page 2-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 3 Page 2-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 4 Page 2-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 10:59:00 AM PA Land Use Acres Density Range Target Density Target Units Rooms 1 Open Space Recreation 17.2 2 Resort / Spa 38.2 100 3 Medium Density Residential 26.1 4-8 du/ac 7.9 205 4 Low Density Residential 29.2 2-4 du/ac 2.9 85 5 Low Density Residential 9.9 2-4 du/ac 2.7 27 6 Low Density Residential 11.3 2-4 du/ac 2.7 31 7 Medium Density Residential 20.7 4-8 du/ac 7.9 163 8 Low Density Residential 18.1 2-4 du/ac 3.4 61 9 Low Density Residential 21.7 2-4 du/ac 3.4 73 10 Medium Density Residential 14.8 4-8 du/ac 5.0 74 11 Low Density Residential 26.5 2-4 du/ac 2.8 75 12 Resort / Golf 45.9 13 Low Density Residential 50.5 2-4 du/ac 2.1 107 14 Low Density Residential 30.6 2-4 du/ac 1.6 48 15 Low Density Residential 35.2 2-4 du/ac 1.8 65 16 Low Density Residential 35.1 2-4 du/ac 2.0 70 17 Low Density Residential 50.7 2-4 du/ac 2.3 116 18 Open Space Recreation 18.1 19 Open Space Recreation 8.8 20 Open Space Recreation 22.0 21 Open Space Recreation (Golf) 122.0 22 Open Space Recreation 28.4 23 Open Space Natural 151.8 24 Open Space Natural 10.7 25 Master Planned Roadways 32.5 TOTALS 876.0 1,200 100 Page 2-3: Commented [CF14] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 12:55:00 PM Map says 50.6, please change whichever is incorrect. Page 2-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:09:00 AM Master Planned Roadways Acres Jefferson 17.4 Loop West 9.4 Loop East 5.4 Section 5 Access 0.3 TOTAL 32.5 Page 2-4: Commented [CF15] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 12:57:00 PM These #s don’t match the exhibit, please change whichever is incorrect Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:47:00 PM Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:00:00 AM , Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:52:00 PM 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:52:00 PM 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 6 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/7/2019 9:39:00 AM 7 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 9, 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 12 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 11 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM , 16 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 7 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:38:00 PM 6 2.1.1 Page 2-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:45:00 PM These Planning Areas are located south of Jefferson Street and adjacent to Planning Area 19. Page 2-4: Commented [NC16] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:26:00 PM You must add which zone applies. Presumably, it’s RL. Page 2-4: Commented [AC17R16] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:25:00 PM Revised Page 2-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Page 2-4: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman Page 2-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:34:00 PM 4 Page 2-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 5 Page 2-5: Commented [NC18] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:30:00 PM Same comment as in first draft: Can any of these product types be built in any of the Single Family Detached – Low Density planning areas? If so, say so. Page 2-5: Commented [AC19R18] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:30:00 PM Added under development standards Page 2-5: Commented [CF20] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:29:00 PM All setbacks need to be measured from property lines, not just front. Page 2-5: Commented [CF21] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 11:24:00 AM Please add this footnote to the side yard setbacks for all residential development standards tables. Page 2-5: Commented [AC22R21] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:36:00 PM added Page 2-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:52:00 PM Page 2-5: Commented [CF23] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:21:00 PM Check cross references Page 2-5: Commented [AC24R23] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 1:28:00 PM Is in section 5. Page 2-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:24:00 AM See Page 2-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:37:00 PM 7 2.1.1 Page 2-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:37:00 PM 6 2.1.1 Page 2-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:37:00 PM 9 2.1.1 Page 2-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/7/2019 9:39:00 AM , 9 Page 2-6: Commented [NC25] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:36:00 PM Again, cite the zone which applies. Are there any conditional uses? Page 2-6: Commented [AC26R25] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:41:00 PM no Page 2-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:21:00 AM Page 2-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:36:00 PM 5 Page 2-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 6 Page 2-6: Commented [NC27] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:37:00 PM Please address comments from 1st draft for entire table. Page 2-6: Commented [AC28R27] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:41:00 PM Addressed in section 5. Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:55:00 PM Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:46:00 PM Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:46:00 PM Page 2-6: Commented [CF29] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:28:00 PM All setbacks need to be measured from property lines, not just front. Page 2-6: Commented [CF30] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:24:00 PM Please show a side loaded garage lot on Exhibit 2.5. Page 2-6: Commented [CF31] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 11:24:00 AM Please add this footnote to the side yard setbacks for all residential development standards tables. Page 2-6: Commented [AC32R31] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:37:00 PM added Page 2-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:21:00 AM Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:39:00 PM 2 2.1.1 Page 2-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:39:00 PM 1 2.1.1 Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM Planning Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM A Page 2-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM a Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM area 2 is located Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:14:00 PM in the Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM north Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:14:00 PM ern portion Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM of the site and Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM P Page 2-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM p Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:02:00 PM planning Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM A Page 2-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM a Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:02:00 PM area 12 is Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:14:00 PM located in the Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:02:00 PM south Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:14:00 PM ern portion Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:49:00 PM of the site. Both are planned to be a part of a resort and/or Golf use. The resort planning areas are anticipated to provide 100-keys and golf in Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM P Page 2-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM p Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:51:00 PM planning Page 2-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM A Page 2-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/23/2020 8:53:00 AM a Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:51:00 PM area 12 will have 9-12 holes. Page 2-6: Commented [CF33] Cheri Flores 7/30/2019 11:32:00 AM Please put in a description of the PA’s as the rest of the sections have. Page 2-6: Commented [AC34R33] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:54:00 PM TO BE UPDATED Page 2-6: Commented [AC35R33] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:28:00 PM added Page 2-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 10:32:00 AM For lot configurations of the villas, see Exhibit 2.6. Page 2-6: Commented [NC36] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:38:00 PM Again, cite the zone that applies. Page 2-6: Commented [AC37R36] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:33:00 PM Updated Page 2-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:19:00 PM 2 Page 2-7: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:19:00 PM 1 Page 2-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:19:00 PM 2 Page 2-7: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:19:00 PM 1 Page 2-7: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 11:21:00 AM Page 2-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:36:00 PM 6 Page 2-7: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 7 Page 2-7: Commented [CF38] Cheri Flores 3/21/2019 11:31:00 AM See LQ Municipal Code Section 9.60.310 for development standards for resort residential. The standards there would better suit the Villa use. These standards are for a hotel. Page 2-7: Commented [AC39R38] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:34:00 PM Added and Updated Page 2-7: Commented [CF40] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:18:00 PM Should this be 15 feet? Exhibit 2.6 shows 15 foot min rear setbacks. Page 2-7: Commented [CF41] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:16:00 PM Looks like mechanical equipment can’t be in the side yard setback since it needs a 3 foot clearance and the side setbacks are 3 ft. They’ll need to go in the rear yard setback. Page 2-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:06:00 PM Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 7 Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:43:00 PM 8 Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:21:00 PM 100 Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:21:00 PM 75 Hotel keys / 25 Villa Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:21:00 PM keys Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:26:00 PM keys Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:43:00 PM 1, 18, 19, 20, 21, and 22 2.1.1 Page 2-8: Commented [CF42] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:33:00 PM This is what is in Chapter 4 in the recreation plan and on Exhibit 2.7, isn’t it? Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:36:00 PM will be submitted to the Planning Department for review and approval prior to approval of any Tentative Tract Map Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:36:00 PM is included in Chapter 4 and shown on Exhibit 2.7 Page 2-8: Commented [CF43] Cheri Flores 3/21/2019 11:35:00 AM Make sure with Tribe how close you can go Page 2-8: Commented [AC44R43] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:40:00 PM Text added Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/7/2019 9:49:00 AM 2 Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/7/2019 9:49:00 AM 3 Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:11:00 AM 7 Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:11:00 AM 3 Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:39:00 PM Chapter 9.120 Special Purpose Permitted Uses, Page 2-8: Commented [NC45] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:43:00 PM Cite the zone that applies. Page 2-8: Commented [AC46R45] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:19:00 PM Added Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM Recreational 2.1.1.1 Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM /Recreation 2.1.1.1 Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM Recreational Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM The Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM /Recreation Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:44:00 PM area Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:38:00 PM 7 Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:38:00 PM 3 Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:39:00 PM s Page 2-8: Commented [NC47] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:43:00 PM Cite the zone. Page 2-8: Commented [AC48R47] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:18:00 PM Cited above Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:44:00 PM – Planning Areas 23 and 24 2.1.1 Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:39:00 PM , Page 2-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:11:00 AM 7 Page 2-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:11:00 AM 3 Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:40:00 PM restricted Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:40:00 PM natural Page 2-8: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:41:00 PM recreation Page 2-8: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:41:00 PM /recreation Page 2-9: Commented [NC49] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:47:00 PM The road in Section 5 should be included here too. Page 2-9: Commented [AC50R49] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:25:00 PM Added Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:42:00 PM Restricted  Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:42:00 PM /Natural  Page 2-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:53:00 PM in Section  Page 2-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:53:00 PM in Section  Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:43:00 PM Natural 2.1.1.1 Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:43:00 PM /Natural 2.1.1.1 Page 2-9: Commented [CF51] Cheri Flores 4/10/2019 8:24:00 AM I did not see a height up to 75 feet to be specifically permitted in the Code. If you can find the Code section, please cite it. If not, the SP will set the height limit per CVWD requirements. Page 2-9: Commented [AC52R51] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:28:00 PM Note added and revised Page 2-9: Commented [CF53] Cheri Flores 3/25/2019 5:06:00 PM Development will also need to comply with CVMSHCP Adjacency Guidelines Page 2-9: Commented [AC54R53] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:28:00 PM Note added Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:46:00 PM Zoning Ordinance  Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:46:00 PM Municipal Code  Header and footer changes Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:47:00 PM 2.0 Page 2-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:48:00 PM Heading 1 Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 2:49:00 PM Page 2-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:48:00 PM Heading 1, Centered, Border: Bottom: (Single solid line, Auto, 0.5 pt Line width) Page 2-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:48:00 PM of 9 Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes 191114_Section 3-City Edits Main document changes and comments Page 3-1: Commented [NC1] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:55:00 AM This section needs bolstering with graphics in the text. Please put the exhibits throughout instead of at the end of the section for easier reference. Focus on materials, colors and architectural styles. Add a section on prohibited styles and materials for architectural section. Page 3-1: Commented [AC2R1] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:35:00 PM Graphics to stay in back of sections Page 3-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:49:00 PM Page 3-1: Commented [NC3] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:21:00 AM Note previous comment regarding proper capitalization Page 3-1: Commented [AC4R3] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:46:00 PM FIXED Page 3-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 2:14:00 PM Font: 14 pt Page 3-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 2:13:00 PM Font: 14 pt Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:50:00 PM tens of thousandsthousands of acres of Page 3-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 2:13:00 PM thousands of Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:50:00 PM known Page 3-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:50:00 PM including Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM as Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM as well as Page 3-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM and Page 3-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM , Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM s Page 3-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:57:00 PM Page 3-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/25/2019 2:48:00 PM high end Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/25/2019 2:48:00 PM high-end Page 3-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:51:00 PM which borders the Resort/Spa Page 3-2: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 10:48:00 AM This should be Section 4.4 Architectural Design Guidelines Page 3-2: Commented [AC6R5] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:03:00 PM REVISED Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:15:00 PM 3.1-3.6 Page 3-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:14:00 PM 3.1–3.10 Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:18:00 AM typical estates Page 3-2: Commented [CF7] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:55:00 PM What is the difference between Exhibits 3.1 and 3.7? They are both for Estate homes. Do we need both? Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:18:00 AM , Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:12:00 AM 3.7-3.9. Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:16:00 PM 5  Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:16:00 PM 6  Page 3-2: Commented [CF8] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:56:00 PM Finish out this list with the resort residential. Page 3-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:16:00 AM  Page 3-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:17:00 AM Page 3-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:58:00 PM Resort Residential  Resort Homes, Exhibit  Villas, Exhibit Page 3-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:58:00 PM List Paragraph Page 3-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:58:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman Page 3-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:57:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman Page 3-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:57:00 PM List Paragraph, Bulleted + Level: 1 + Aligned at: 0.25" + Indent at: 0.5" Page 3-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:57:00 PM Font: (Default) Times New Roman Page 3-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:12:00 AM 10 Page 3-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:10:00 AM 7 Page 3-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:03:00 AM Page 3-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:59:00 PM Page 3-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 11:36:00 AM 3.4.3 Fences and Walls For purposes of this section, “fence” or “wall” means any type of fence, wall, retaining wall, sound attenuation wall, screen or windscreen. The terms “fence” and “wall” are used interchangeably in this section to mean any or all of the preceding structures. All fencing and wall use are subject to the City of La Quinta municipal 9.60.030 Fences and walls Page 3-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:00:00 PM and Page 3-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 11:38:00 AM should reflect the materials and design of the approved home façade. The treatment of the wall should match the architectural treatment of the residential building, or the walls and/or fences that are an integral part of the garden design. Examples of materials that may be used for fences and walls are found in Exhibit 3.11. Low freestanding courtyard walls, gateposts and entry monuments under six (6) feet high may be integrated into the driveway or auto court-design. Walls, fences, terraces and outdoor landscape areas should appear to be extensions of indoor areas and the building architecture, rather than as independent elements. Walls shall be architecturally compatible with the house and built of similar materials and colors “Drive through” archways or beams may be permitted on a case by case basis with the approval of the City. The design concept, therefore, is to make fences and walls blend with both the architecture and the landscape, while still providing privacy and security consistent with the needs of individual lot owners. Fences and walls placed on lots shall be an extension of the colors and materials of the adjacent residential architecture, visually compatible and be of materials related to the land (such as stone). They may occur as an extension of house living spaces, to frame courtyards or to direct views. Wrought iron fencing styles and downslope fencing techniques are encouraged to maintain views. The following requirements apply to all fences and walls within the Travertine Community: 1. Walls and fences should be kept as low as possible while performing their intended function. Wall height should be minimized to avoid a “fortress” appearance. The design of fences and walls, as well as the materials used, should be consistent with the overall house design. Appropriate materials for walls and fencing include tube steel, river rock stone veneer, split face block and slumpstone block 1. Page 3-4: Commented [CF9] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:04:00 PM You may, if you want, include bamboo or glass as appropriate materials. The Municipal Code does so just want to give that option. Page 3-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/25/2019 2:06:00 PM 1. . 3. Fence and wall colors should match or complement the color of the building. 4. Tops of retaining walls should blend with natural contours. Ends of walls should not end abruptly, but are to transition into existing landforms, rock outcroppings and vegetation. 5. Plant materials are encouraged to be woven in and around fences to help fences merge with the landscape. 6. Adjacent to a Nonresidential Zone or Uses, the maximum fence height between a residential zone or use and a nonresidential zone or use shall be eight feet. Prohibited Fence Materials and Construction Fences include, the use of barbed wire, razor wire, chain link, or similar materials in or on fences is prohibited in all residential districts. Chain link fencing is permitted for temporary construction fences when authorized by a minor use permit issued in accordance with Section 9.210.02 Page 3-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:05:00 PM 5 Page 3-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:05:00 PM 0 Page 3-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/25/2019 2:13:00 PM 0. Said minor use permit shall not be approved until a permit for grading, or construction, has been filed for, whichever comes first. Page 3-5: Commented [CF10] Cheri Flores 8/7/2019 11:08:00 AM Please provide a subsection on walls and fences and provide an exhibit with examples. The subsection can go at the end of this section. Page 3-5: Commented [AC11R10] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 11:38:00 AM Added Page 3-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:10:00 AM 11 Page 3-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:19:00 AM 11 Page 3-5: Commented [NC12] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:25:00 AM Exhibit 4-11 should be in Landscaping section Page 3-5: Commented [AC13R12] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:47:00 PM Wrong, please look at updated graphics sent 1-25-19 to Cherie Page 3-5: Commented [CF14R12] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:20:00 PM Please remove reference to exhibits showing architectural styles. These are covered in the previous section. Page 3-5: Commented [AC15R12] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:28:00 PM updated Page 3-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:20:00 AM 31 Page 3-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:10:00 AM 27 Page 3-5: Commented [CF16] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 10:49:00 AM Move this to Architectural Design Guidelines Section Page 3-5: Commented [CF17] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 10:48:00 AM Move this to Landscape Design Guidelines Section Page 3-5: Commented [AC18R17] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:03:00 PM moved Page 3-5: Commented [NC19] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:51:00 AM Add plant palette. Should not be an Appendix, but in text. Prohibited plants (see comment below) must also be included in document. Page 3-5: Commented [AC20R19] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:47:00 PM To stay in Appendix Page 3-5: Commented [CF21R19] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:15:00 PM Please put plant palette into this section as previously requested. Page 3-5: Commented [AC22R19] Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:00:00 PM ADDED Page 3-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 8 Page 3-5: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 4 Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:21:00 AM s 3.12-3.24 Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:21:00 AM 3.11 Page 3-8: Commented [NC23] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:41:00 AM Need to add concepts for the homes and the resort/spa. Page 3-8: Commented [AC24R23] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:01:00 PM Seen in exhibits 13-14 Page 3-8: Commented [CF25R23] Cheri Flores 8/7/2019 10:47:00 AM These exhibits show concept for streetscapes and don’t show landscape concepts for the resort/spa or for the homes. Please provide this. Local streetscapes need to be addressed. Page 3-8: Commented [AC26R23] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:35:00 PM added Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:17:00 PM Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:58:00 PM . Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:58:00 PM : Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM E Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM e Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM s Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM 5 Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM 2 Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM 31 Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM 27 Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:00:00 PM Page 3-8: Moved to page 10 (Move #1) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:00:00 PM Sections 1-3, Exhibit 3.23, show the natural condition along the projects’ western boundary to the development. The multi-use trail runs along the western boundary and separates the natural environment from the projects graded slopes. Slopes along this edge are generally graded at a 2:1 ratio; along with the outer edge, they will also be reinforced for flood protection. Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM on. Page 3-8: Moved to page 11 (Move #2) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Sections 4-6, Exhibit 3.24, represent the relationship of golf uses along the southern edge of the property to the golf facility uses and residential uses. Sections 7-9, Exhibit 3.25, generally represent the north eastern boundary of the project and show the relationship between the residential uses, the trail and beyond the property boundary to the natural ground. Section 9 shows the connection between the Resort/Spa use and the preserved Coral Mountain. Page 3-8: Moved to page 9 (Move #3) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM  Sections 10-12, Exhibit 3.26, show the Jefferson Street landscaped slopes where the gradient has been softened to a 5:1 ration to both emulate the natural slope of the property and provide spacious setbacks between the street and the residential land uses. Section 11 cuts through two residential uses and the secondary access to the Resort/Spa from the Travertine community. Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Sections 13-15, Exhibit 3.27, the spine trail that connects both community parks is shown in Section 13. This trail will be 10 feet wide and will accommodate pedestrians and cyclists to provide off-street access to the community amenities. Section 14 demonstrates the loop road system and the generous setbacks to residential development. Slope gradients on either side of the street are at a 5:1 ratio to allow for landscape and distance to separate homes from the street. Section 15 is located on Jefferson Street between the two-project round-a-bouts. Again, the slope gradients are softened to a 5:1 ratio to provide large setbacks to residential uses. Page 3-8: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:57:00 PM Page 3-8: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/23/2019 3:06:00 PM The extension of the secondary arterial connection between Jefferson and Avenue 62 will be an ungated public road. Gating will occur to serve the uphill and downhill portion of the project, both of which are in the loop roads, connected to the Jefferson and Avenue 62 arterial road. Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:20:00 AM Primary vehicular gates are to be located on Jefferson Street at the northern entry point to the project and at the Avenue 62 edge. Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:21:00 AM two Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:21:00 AM 4 Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:22:00 AM 3.20. Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:20:00 AM 19. Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:01:00 PM inside the gates Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:01:00 PM gradually become more Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:01:00 PM be Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/13/2019 9:55:00 AM 9 foot Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:20:00 AM 13 Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:23:00 AM 14 Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:20:00 AM 14 Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:23:00 AM 15 Page 3-9: Commented [AC27] Alexsundra Captan 9/13/2019 9:49:00 AM gates Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:23:00 PM Local street landscapes will be designed in a unified matter with the master road system of the project, see Exhibit 3.24. Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Page 3-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:27:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-9: Moved from page 8 (Move #3) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Sections 10-12, Exhibit 303.26, show the Jefferson Street landscaped slopes where the gradient has been softened to a 5:1 ration to both emulate the natural slope of the property and provide spacious setbacks between the street and the residential land uses. Cross-sSection 11 cuts through two residential uses and the secondary access to the Resort/Spa from the Travertine community. Page 3-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:27:00 PM S Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:19:00 AM Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:23:00 AM 30 Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:19:00 AM 3.26 Page 3-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:26:00 PM n Page 3-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:27:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:27:00 PM S Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:24:00 AM . Page 3-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:28:00 PM Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:45:00 PM T Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM t Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 9 Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 5 Page 3-9: Commented [CF28] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:28:00 PM Make sure this is consistent with CVMSHCP adjacency guidelines Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/25/2019 2:51:00 PM Page 3-9: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 9 Page 3-9: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:44:00 PM 5 Page 3-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:21:00 AM 16 Page 3-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:24:00 AM 17 Page 3-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:28:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-10: Moved from page 8 (Move #1) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:00:00 PM Sections 1-3, Exhibit 3.2327, show the natural condition along the projects’ western boundary to the development. The multi-use trail runs along the western boundary and separates the natural environment from the projects graded slopes. Slopes along this edge are generally graded at a 2:1 ratio; along with the outer edge, they will also be reinforced for flood protection. Cross-sSections 13-15, Exhibit 3.31, show the spine trail that connects both community parks are shown in Section 13. This trail will be 10 feet wide and will accommodate pedestrians and cyclists to provide off- street access to the community amenities. Cross-s Section 14 demonstrates the loop road system and the generous setbacks to residential development. Slope gradients on either side of the street are at a 5:1 ratio to allow for landscape and distance to separate homes from the street. Cross- sSection 15 is located on Jefferson Street between the two-project round-a-bouts. Again, the slope gradients are softened to a 5:1 ratio to provide large setbacks to residential uses. Page 3-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:29:00 PM S Page 3-10: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:21:00 AM 23 Page 3-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:21:00 AM 27 Page 3-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Page 3-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:29:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:29:00 PM S Page 3-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Sections 13-15, Exhibit 3.31, Page 3-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:29:00 PM show Page 3-10: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM the spine trail that connects both community parks are shown in Section 13. This trail will be 10 feet wide and will accommodate pedestrians and cyclists to provide off-street access to the community amenities. Page 3-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:30:00 PM are shown in Section 13 Page 3-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:30:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:30:00 PM S Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Section 14 demonstrates the loop road system and the generous setbacks to residential development. Slope gradients on either side of the street are at a 5:1 ratio to allow for landscape and distance to separate homes from the street. Page 3-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:30:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:30:00 PM S Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Section 15 is located on Jefferson Street between the two-project round-a-bouts. Again, the slope gradients are softened to a 5:1 ratio to provide large setbacks to residential uses. Page 3-11: Commented [NC29] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:54:00 AM Move each of these paragraphs to the sub-section to which they apply. Page 3-11: Commented [CF30R29] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:32:00 PM Please incorporate Nicole’s comment from March 2019 above. Or create another section to address these. Page 3-11: Commented [AC31R29] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:29:00 PM added Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:01:00 PM Page 3-11: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Page 3-11: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Page 3-11: Commented [NC32] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:51:00 AM See comment above about plant palette and move into document. Page 3-11: Commented [AC33R32] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:58:00 PM Will stay in Appendix Page 3-11: Commented [CF34R32] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:12:00 PM Please insert Plant Palette into this section as previously requested. Page 3-11: Commented [AC35R32] Alexsundra Captan 8/7/2019 2:32:00 PM Inserted. Page 3-11: Commented [NC36] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 10:48:00 AM That’s fine, but what is the landscape theme for the balance of the golf areas? Page 3-11: Commented [AC37R36] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:31:00 AM updated Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 11:26:00 AM .19 Page 3-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:32:00 PM Additionally, the landscape of the Jefferson Street corridor and the adjacent slope is illustrated in Exhibit 3.1314. Page 3-11: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:31:00 AM 14 Page 3-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:31:00 PM Cross-s Page 3-11: Moved from page 8 (Move #2) Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:02:00 PM Sections 4-6, Exhibit 3.2428, represent the relationship of golf uses along the southern edge of the property to the golf facility uses and residential uses. Cross-sSections 7-9, Exhibit 3.2529, generally represent the north eastern boundary of the project and show the relationship between the residential uses, the trail and beyond the property boundary to the natural ground. Cross-sSection 9 shows the connection between the Resort/Spa use and the preserved Coral Mountain. 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Page 3-11: Commented [AC39R38] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:58:00 PM Added Header and footer changes Page 3-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:56:00 PM Page 3-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:56:00 PM Centered, Border: Bottom: (Single solid line, Auto, 0.5 pt Line width) Page 3-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:51:00 PM of 10 Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes 191114_Section 4-city edits Main document changes and comments Page 4-1: Commented [NC1] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:39:00 AM For each subsection, add a discussion of phasing, with particular focus on Phase 1 (what needs to be done prior to any building construction) Page 4-1: Commented [AC2R1] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:36:00 AM added Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:46:00 PM Arterial Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:46:00 PM Arterial Page 4-1: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:41:00 PM Check with County on this. East of Monroe is in their jurisdiction. Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:37:00 AM the Construction Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:40:00 AM stage Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:13:00 PM No. Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:13:00 PM # Page 4-1: Commented [CF4] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:42:00 PM Please label Dike #4 on the Circulation map and the Site Location Map so that people know where it is. Any other dikes in the area that are referenced should be on these maps too. Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:41:00 AM will have two gated entry points, Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:45:00 PM , a portion of Bureau of Land Management (BLM) land, Page 4-1: Commented [NC5] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:06:00 AM How? Need to describe need for securing property agreements and phasing if the non-project section of Jefferson is not built when this project develops. Page 4-1: Commented [AC6R5] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:36:00 AM added Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:45:00 PM Bureau of Land Management ( Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:46:00 PM ) Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:46:00 PM The spine road Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:51:00 PM The Jefferson Street Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:51:00 PM / Avenue 62 spine road Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:43:00 AM gated Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:46:00 PM Arterial Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:47:00 PM Arterial Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:53:00 PM 4 Page 4-1: Commented [CF7] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:32:00 AM Let’s make this 4.2 Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM Page 4-1: Commented [AC8R7] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:44:00 PM updated Page 4-1: Commented [CF9R7] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:53:00 PM The exhibit did not get updated, please renumber exhibit 4.4 to be 4.2. Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM .3 Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM .2 Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM 4 Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM 3 Page 4-1: Commented [CF10] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:38:00 AM These would be 4.3 and 4.4 Page 4-1: Commented [AC11R10] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:44:00 PM Updated Page 4-1: Commented [CF12R10] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:54:00 PM The exhibits did not get updated, renumber exhibit 4.2 to be 4.3 and exhibit 4.3 to be 4.4. Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:21:00 PM Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:21:00 PM Page 4-1: Commented [NC13] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:13:00 AM Define – one way or parking on one side? Page 4-1: Commented [AC14R13] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 10:09:00 AM Revised Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:21:00 PM . . Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:21:00 PM . Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:21:00 PM Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:11:00 PM Page 4-1: Commented [NC15] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:15:00 AM Where? How? Page 4-1: Commented [AC16R15] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 10:00:00 AM Text Added Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM 5 Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM 1 Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:43:00 AM on Page 4-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:43:00 AM off Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM Jefferson Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM the spine roadway Page 4-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM 6 Page 4-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 3:58:00 PM 5 Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:12:00 PM and monumentation Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:48:00 AM off of the spine road and on the loop road entries of the project Page 4-2: Commented [NC17] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:16:00 AM Add where they are expected to be necessary. Page 4-2: Commented [AC18R17] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:37:00 AM added Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:38:00 AM The Construction Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:40:00 AM stage Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:07:00 PM 14.1 Page 4-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:07:00 PM ___- Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:07:00 PM - Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:38:00 AM the Construction Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:38:00 AM stage Page 4-2: Commented [NC19] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:18:00 AM Add a discussion of off site well(s), location and timing. Page 4-2: Commented [AC20R19] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 10:11:00 AM added Page 4-2: Commented [AC21R19] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:57:00 PM Still Tentative Page 4-2: Commented [AC22R19] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM added Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:21:00 PM (CVWD) Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:14:00 PM the Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:14:00 PM Street Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:39:00 AM the Construction Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:40:00 AM stage Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:39:00 AM the Construction Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:39:00 AM stage Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:20:00 PM The well sites necessary to serve the project have been analyzed by CVWD the initial number of well based on the total acreage of the project is equivalent to 9 well sites Page 4-2: Commented [CF23] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:14:00 PM Double check based on more recent conversations with CVWD. Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM . The number of well sites that will actually be needed to serve the site come from a development agreement between CVWD and the land owner Page 4-2: Commented [CF24] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:15:00 PM Is this referring to the well site land owners? If so, please clarify that here. Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM based on extenuating circumstances for providing alternative means and measures of water service to not only to the project but to the region Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:15:00 PM to Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:17:00 PM . Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:17:00 PM , Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM , Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:17:00 PM T Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:17:00 PM t Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM the process for acquisition of well sites will be done by a private purchase by the land owner Page 4-2: Commented [CF25] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:17:00 PM Clarify who this is referring to. Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM , where the environmental clearance coincident with the project will be generic for all typical well sites located within CVWD’s jurisdiction. As the site-specific well sites are purchased by the land owner ultimately dedicated to CVWD, any unique conditions not covered by the EIR for the overall project will then be covered supplementary to that document. Page 4-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:09:00 AM Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:14:00 PM Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM 7 Page 4-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:13:00 PM 8 Page 4-2: Commented [CF26] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:52:00 AM Change to 4.7 Page 4-2: Commented [AC27R26] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:20:00 PM Changed Page 4-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:59:00 AM Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:20:00 PM may Page 4-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:20:00 PM are Page 4-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:20:00 PM be Page 4-3: Commented [NC28] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:20:00 AM Where? What size? When? Page 4-3: Commented [AC29R28] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 1:40:00 PM TBD Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:39:00 AM the Construction Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:39:00 AM stage Page 4-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:21:00 PM Coachella Valley Water District Page 4-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:21:00 PM CVWD Page 4-3: Commented [NC30] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:21:00 AM This belongs in financing Page 4-3: Commented [AC31R30] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 10:12:00 AM Removed Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/13/2019 9:33:00 AM s Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 1:02:00 PM Exhibit 4.8 and 4.9, demonstrates consistency with the Hillside Conservation regulations of the City in that slopes greater than 20% Page 4-3: Commented [CF32] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:35:00 AM Only cut and fill is shown. You can put slope percentage on it if you like. If not, don’t say the plan demonstrates consistency. Page 4-3: Commented [AC33R32] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 2:31:00 PM To be updated on graphic Page 4-3: Commented [CF34R32] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:24:00 PM Please update exhibit. Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 1:02:00 PM are avoided. Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 12:55:00 PM 10 and 4.11 Page 4-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:14:00 PM 7) Page 4-3: Commented [CF35] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:52:00 AM Change to 4.8 Also, make sure the title of the exhibit says conceptual grading plan. Page 4-3: Commented [AC36R35] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:34:00 PM Updated Page 4-3: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:14:00 PM ) Page 4-3: Commented [NC37] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:26:00 AM Recommend rewording this. The intent of the sentence is not, I don’t believe, to convey flooding risk to downstream properties. Page 4-3: Commented [AC38R37] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 9:52:00 AM Revised Page 4-3: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:25:00 PM The project site was part of a land exchange in 1988-1989, known as the Toro Canyon Land Exchange, between the BLM, Berkey and Associates and the Nature Conservancy, to dispose of public lands that would be more suitable for development in exchange for private land further to the south that provides important habitat for Peninsular Bighorn Sheep. As part of the land exchange, the Travertine project site would be developable in accordance with land use planning designations imposed by the County of Riverside. Upon approval of the Toro Canyon land exchange, the 638.56 acres were combined with approximately 270 acres of adjacent property owned by private landowners. The land exchanges resulted in a revised total project area of approximately 909 acres. In June 1995, the Travertine and Green Specific Plan was approved and an EIR was certified by the La Quinta City Council by adoption of Resolution 95-39, subject to conditions of approval and a Mitigation Monitoring and Reporting Program (MMRP). Prior to adoption of the Specific Plan, a General Plan Amendment and a Zone Change were adopted. The Specific Plan established site-specific standards and guidelines for the project area and identified a number of land uses including those shown in Table 1, Approved Travertine and Green Specific Plan Land Uses. A cultivated vineyard once occupied most of the northern portion of the project site, but has been abandoned since 2007. The only known land use of the site can be seen in an area near the center of the site, see Exhibit 1.3; this area was used as a vineyard that included, grape vines, irrigation lines, access roads. The vineyard is no longer active and appears to have ceased operation sometime in 2005-06. Page 4-3: Commented [CF39] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:55:00 AM This doesn’t make sense here. Please remove. Page 4-3: Commented [AC40R39] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:20:00 PM Removed Page 4-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:03:00 PM 4.10 Page 4-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:15:00 PM 4.7 Page 4-4: Commented [CF41] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 8:59:00 AM This exhibit does not show any flood flows. Exhibit 1.8 shows this. Either repeat it in this chapter or move it to this chapter to show conceptual drainage and hydrology Page 4-4: Commented [AC42R41] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:19:00 PM Exhibit now referenced to 1.8 Page 4-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:03:00 PM 4.10 Page 4-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:15:00 PM 4.7 Page 4-4: Commented [CF43] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:01:00 AM This exhibit does not show hydrology, see above comment Page 4-4: Commented [AC44R43] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:19:00 PM Exhibit now referenced to 4.10 Page 4-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:15:00 PM , Page 4-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:04:00 PM 4.11 Page 4-4: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:15:00 PM 4.7 Page 4-4: Commented [CF45] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:02:00 AM It doesn’t. See above comment. Page 4-4: Commented [AC46R45] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 1:19:00 PM Exhibit now referenced to 4.9 Page 4-4: Commented [CF47R45] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:27:00 PM Thank you, please label exhibit 4.10 as Conceptual Hydrology Plan on the exhibit. Page 4-4: Commented [CF48] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:05:00 AM This isn’t shown on exhibit 1.8, make sure to include it. Page 4-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:29:00 PM Coachella Valley Water District Page 4-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:29:00 PM CVWD Page 4-4: Commented [NC49] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:30:00 AM Add reference to having CVWD approval now, and append same as appendix. Page 4-4: Commented [AC50R49] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:38:00 AM TBD Page 4-4: Commented [AC51R49] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:09:00 PM addded Page 4-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:29:00 PM 1 Page 4-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:29:00 PM 0 Page 4-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:40:00 AM the Construction Page 4-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:41:00 AM stage Page 4-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:30:00 PM water Page 4-4: Commented [NC52] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:32:00 AM Why is this suddenly not narrative? Recommend removal. Instead, describe on-site stormwater system requirements, phasing and interconnection (if any). Page 4-4: Commented [AC53R52] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:38:00 AM FIXED Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:34:00 PM 77 Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:05:00 PM 7 Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:34:00 PM 8 Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:34:00 PM Conceptual Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:34:00 PM and Exhibit 4. Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:34:00 PM 9 Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:34:00 PM 8 Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 4:34:00 PM 8 Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:35:00 PM , Slope Ratio Diagram Page 4-5: Commented [CF54] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:35:00 AM Only cut and fill is shown. You can put slope percentage on it if you like. If not, don’t say the plan demonstrates consistency. Page 4-5: Commented [AC55R54] Alexsundra Captan 9/11/2019 2:31:00 PM To be updated on graphic Page 4-5: Commented [CF56R54] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:35:00 PM Please update the graphic. Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM Additionally, a Page 4-5: Moved from page 5 (Move #1) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM All areas adjacent to General Plan designated open space areas shall comply with the requirements of Section 9.110.070 and 9.140.040 (Hillside Conservation Regulations) of the Zoning OrdinanceMunicipal Code. Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM A Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM Zoning Ordinance Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM Municipal Code Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM Page 4-5: Moved to page 5 (Move #1) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:39:00 PM All areas adjacent to General Plan designated open space areas shall comply with the requirements of Section 9.110.070 and 9.140.040 (Hillside Conservation Regulations) of the Zoning Ordinance. Page 4-5: Moved to page 6 (Move #2) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:40:00 PM Southern California Gas Company provides natural gas to the project site. Page 4-5: Commented [NC57] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:37:00 AM Is a substation required? If so, where? When in phasing? Page 4-5: Commented [AC58R57] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:38:00 AM Added Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:40:00 PM (IID) Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:51:00 PM 5-acre Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:36:00 AM the Construction Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/10/2019 11:41:00 AM stage Page 4-5: Commented [CF59] Cheri Flores 9/11/2019 9:41:00 AM This has to be covered in the EIR similar to the off-site wells. IID requires this. Page 4-5: Commented [AC60R59] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:11:00 PM Text Added Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:10:00 PM All required off-site parcels required for utilities Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:48:00 PM utilities Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:48:00 PM the substation Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:10:00 PM will be chosen to fit the requirements of CVWD and IID. All parcels meet CVWD requirements including the region, elevation, minimum size, distance from the site, and proximity to one another. The metrics of these facilities will be provided by CVWD and the environmental impacts of the sites will be analyzed using secondary sources such as California Historical Resources Information System (CHRIS) records search. Desktop analyses of biological, cultural and paleo will be performed on the proposed sites. Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM of CVWD and Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM All parcels meet CVWD requirements including the region, elevation, minimum size, distance from the site, and proximity to one another. The metrics of these facilities will be provided by CVWD Page 4-5: Moved to page 5 (Move #3) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM and the environmental impacts of the sites will be analyzed using secondary sources such as California Historical Resources Information System (CHRIS) records search. Desktop analyses of biological, cultural and paleo will be performed on the proposed sites. Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM Page 4-5: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM Indent: Left: 0" Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM The five-acre site required by IID for a substation Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:10:00 PM The five-acre site required by IID for a substation Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM and Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:10:00 PM will be studied with metrics provided by the utility Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM . Page 4-5: Moved from page 5 (Move #3) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:49:00 PM and theThe environmental impacts of the potential sites will be analyzed using secondary sources such as California Historical Resources Information System (CHRIS) records search. Desktop analyses of biological, cultural and paleontological resources will be performed on the proposed sites. Page 4-5: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM and the Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM The Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:50:00 PM potential Page 4-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:51:00 PM ntological resources Page 4-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:10:00 PM The location of the 5-acre site will be within a 2-mile radius of the project. The routing of the proposed service lines along the route to the site will be studied for visual impacts and aesthetics in addition to all other known impact metrics that IID will make available. Page 4-6: Moved from page 5 (Move #2) Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:40:00 PM Southern California Gas Company provides natural gas to the project site. Page 4-6: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:09:00 PM Page 4-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:09:00 PM Page 4-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:40:00 PM 35kV Page 4-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:40:00 PM 92kV Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 3:09:00 PM Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Commented [NC61] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:40:00 AM Add a subsection on need for new south LQ fire station and how it will be implemented (fair share, phasing, etc.). Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Commented [AC62R61] A CAPTAN 5/10/2019 3:45:00 PM added Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:46:00 PM Avenue Page 4-6: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:46:00 PM nd Street Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Commented [NC63] Nicole Criste 3/31/2019 11:41:00 AM Police is at City Hall. Sheriff station is in Thermal. Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-6: Commented [AC64R63] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 9:49:00 AM Fixed Page 4-6: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:55:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 4-7: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:53:00 PM 7 Page 4-7: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:53:00 PM 3 Page 4-7: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 9:49:00 AM Street. The Page 4-7: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 4:55:00 PM Font: Condensed by 0.05 pt Header and footer changes Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:44:00 PM Page 4-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:44:00 PM Centered, Indent: Left: 0", Right: 0.06", Border: Bottom: (Single solid line, Auto, 0.5 pt Line width), Tab stops: 5.5", Left + Not at 6.5" Page 4-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:53:00 PM of 9 Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes 191114_Section 5-CITY EDITS Main document changes and comments Page 5-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:56:00 PM Heading 1, None, Line spacing: single, No bullets or numbering, Widow/Orphan control, Allow hanging punctuation, Adjust space between Latin and Asian text, Adjust space between Asian text and numbers, Tab stops: Not at 0.44" Page 5-1: Formatted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:57:00 PM Top: 0.81", Bottom: 0.13" Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM The final financing arrangements, including participation agreements, if any, shall be determined at the Tentative Map stage of development and shall be reviewed and approved by the City of La Quinta as well as all affected agencies if necessary. Page 5-1: Commented [CF1] Cheri Flores 10/4/2019 1:15:00 PM Are the final financing arrangements to be determined at the Final Map stage, or with the smaller lot TTMs? If so, please revise to reflect this. If not, then financing arrangements need to be better described here since the Tentative map is being processed with the SPA. Expand on what those bullet points mean Page 5-1: Commented [AC2R1] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 10:42:00 AM Described Page 5-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:29:00 PM The applicant shall enter into a Subdivision Improvement Agreement with the City, which requires the developer to submit bonds to the City to guarantee completion of improvements, at the Final Map stage of development. Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM The current plan for financing infrastructure and improvements to Page 5-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:31:00 PM to Page 5-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:31:00 PM will Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/31/2019 9:07:00 AM be provided by the Hofmann organization Page 5-1: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:04:00 PM What is the name of the Hofmann organization? Is it Hofmann Land Development or another LLC? Explain also that this is the property owner of the Travertine project. Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM . At this time no outside financing mechanisms are anticipated to be needed to provide infrastructure to service the project. Any shared costs or reimbursement agreements coincident with other developments within the area will be quantified through agreements governed by the Page 5-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:05:00 PM C Page 5-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:05:00 PM c Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM city of La Quinta for purposes of assessing future projects. Page 5-1: Commented [CF4] Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:35:00 PM Please denote how many phases there will be. Traffic Study shows 3, NOP shows 4. This needs to be consistently described in all studies Also, please describe that there are two different types of phasing plans and what is the difference between the construction phasing and conceptual phasing. Page 5-1: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM The primary intent of the construction phasing plan of the Travertine development is to ensure that complete and adequate public facilities and services are in place and available to builders, residents and first responders, see Exhibit 5.1. The project will provide all wet and dry utilities from Avenue 62 to the point of connection for various product phases and water tanks. The project will be constructed by a master developer. The master developer will provide the mass grading and the rough graded pads for builder product. They will also install all major and common roads, as well as install all backbone sewer, water, and storm drains in addition to dry utilities that will serve the individual builder pads in the project. All areas that are common in the project will be landscaped though the master developer process. The individual builder responsibilities will include any interior infrastructure associated with the builder’s product, including interior streets, landscaping, common areas, amenities, as well as any of the utility points of connection to the master system (sewer, water, storm drain and dry utilities). Page 5-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:15:00 PM One well will be constructed during the Construction Phase I stage, located off the Travertine project site. Additionally, an offsite 5-acre substation will be constructed during the Construction Phase I stage. Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:19:00 PM The project is anticipated to be constructed from east to west and south to north as the major infrastructure for water, sewer, storm drain and dry utilities will be pioneered with the construction and widening of Avenue 62 south of the Trilogy project , continue over Dike Page 5-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:08:00 PM No. Page 5-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:08:00 PM # Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM #4 westerly towards the Travertine and project over CVWD’s recharge basin Page 5-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:09:00 PM and Page 5-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:33:00 PM s Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM . The major infrastructure will be constructed from the east moving up the spine road, providing laterals and points of connections to the individual development areas. Page 5-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:34:00 PM Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM The construction, installation, and/or extension of infrastructure and facilities necessary to serve each phase of development shall be operational prior to the issuance of the first Certificate of Occupancy or Final Inspection for that particular phase. Perimeter streets and associated landscaping (i.e. the extension of Jefferson Page 5-2: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 4/26/2019 4:00:00 PM Please specify what will be “backbone” roads, water, sewer etc. built prior to construction of anything else Page 5-2: Commented [AC6R5] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 1:46:00 PM TBD Page 5-2: Commented [CF7R5] Cheri Flores 10/4/2019 1:17:00 PM Will the spine road be completed with the first phase? Please note that. When will any off sites improvements be done, ie wells, substation? What about water lines and sewer lines? Are the mains going in with the spine road at first and then the rest go in phases? We need some assumptions here. Page 5-2: Commented [AC8R5] Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 12:52:00 PM Revised Page 5-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:09:00 PM Street Page 5-2: Commented [AY9] Amy Yu 3/27/2020 5:14:00 PM Should show Jefferson St extension in Construction Phase 1 on Exhibit 5.1 Page 5-2: Commented [CF10] Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 12:31:00 PM See Amy’s comment above, or clarify the language here. It is unclear if the entire Jefferson St extension will be installed in first phase, or if half is inf first phase and half in 2nd phase. Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM ) will be required to be constructed and installed prior to the issuance of the very first Certificate of Occupancy or Final Inspection for the entire development. It should be noted that, as development in Travertine and the surrounding community continues, market conditions as well as infrastructure design and improvements may evolve and change, resulting in various revisions to the phasing program anticipated and described herein. These revisions, upon review and confirmation by the City of La Quinta they meet the intent of the Specific Plan and adequately serve the needs of the community, shall be permitted without an amendment to the Specific Plan Page 5-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 12:33:00 PM , subject to the approval of the Design and Development Director Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:28:00 PM . Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:34:00 AM 2 Page 5-2: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 11/14/2019 11:34:00 AM 1 Page 5-2: Commented [CF11] Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:38:00 PM This exhibit should be renamed to Conceptual Product Phasing Plan to provide more clarity Page 5-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 4/1/2020 2:41:00 PM The current policy for Riverside County Fire is to allow up to 200 units off a single point of access. At this time the city of La Quinta has commented that they do not support this policy. Page 5-2: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:31:00 PM Table 10: Product Phasing Plan Summary PA Land Use Acres Density Range Target Density Target Units PHASE 1 11 Low Density Residential 26.5 2-4 du/ac 2.8 75 12 Resort / Golf 45.9 13 Low Density Residential 50.5 2-4 du/ac 2.1 107 14 Low Density Residential 30.6 2-4 du/ac 1.6 48 15 Low Density Residential 35.2 2-4 du/ac 1.8 65 20 Open Space Recreation 22.0 23 Open Space Natural 151.8 24 Open Space Natural 10.7 Phase 1 Totals 373.2 295 PHASE 2 6 Low Density Residential 11.3 2-4 du/ac 2.7 31 8 Low Density Residential 18.1 2-4 du/ac 3.4 61 9 Low Density Residential 21.7 2-4 du/ac 3.4 73 10 Medium Density Residential 14.8 4-8 du/ac 5.0 74 16 Low Density Residential 35.1 2-4 du/ac 2.0 70 19 Open Space Recreation 8.8 Phase 2 Totals 109.8 309 PHASE 3 5 Low Density Residential 9.9 2-4 du/ac 2.7 27 7 Medium Density Residential 20.7 4-8 du/ac 7.9 163 17 Low Density Residential 50.7 2-4 du/ac 2.3 116 Phase 3 Totals 81.3 306 PHASE 4 1 Open Space Recreation 17.2 2 Resort / Spa 38.2 3 Medium Density Residential 26.1 4-8 du/ac 7.9 205 4 Low Density Residential 29.2 2-4 du/ac 2.9 85 18 Open Space Recreation 18.1 21 Open Space Recreation (Golf) 122.0 22 Open Space Recreation 28.4 Phase 4 Totals 279.2 290 Grand Total* 843.5 1,200 *Master Planned Roadways are not included in the Grand Total. Master Planned Roadways are built throughout the project from south-east of the project site to the north-west. Page 5-3: Commented [CF12] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 1:01:00 PM Make sure this is still correct after getting info from fire on how many homes can be built without second access Page 5-3: Commented [AC13R12] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 1:48:00 PM The Alternative will be discussed in the EIR, not in the Specific Plan Page 5-3: Commented [CF14R12] Cheri Flores 10/4/2019 1:22:00 PM Please address this comment here. Fire’s determination would affect the phasing Page 5-3: Commented [AC15R12] Alexsundra Captan 10/29/2019 12:52:00 PM Added comment Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:35:00 PM (HOA) Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:34:00 PM Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:35:00 PM Home Owners Association ( Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:35:00 PM ’s Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:35:00 PM ) Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:35:00 PM Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:36:00 PM 11 Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:36:00 PM 9 Page 5-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM Table 11: Maintenance Responsibilities Maintenance Responsibilities CVWD / City Master Property Owners Association (POA) Home Owners Association (HOA) Private CVWD Major Entries × Public Streets within project boundaries (Landscaping) × × Page 5-4: Commented [CF16] Cheri Flores 10/4/2019 2:21:00 PM Who maintains flood control facilities? POA? Please indicate here. Page 5-4: Commented [AC17R16] Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 1:42:00 PM Added Page 5-4: Formatted Table Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 2:34:00 PM Formatted Table Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 2:34:00 PM CVWD / Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 12:36:00 PM × Page 5-4: Inserted Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 12:37:00 PM Public Streets outside project boundaries, within City jurisdiction (Median landscaping only) × Page 5-4: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 2:29:00 PM Private Streets × × × Master Common Landscape × Golf Course × Recreational Facilities × × × Resort Complex × × Flood Control Facilities × Common Landscape × Page 5-4: Deleted Cheri Flores 4/2/2020 2:34:00 PM × Page 5-5: Commented [NC18] Nicole Criste 4/11/2019 1:36:00 PM What about other changes? Style of architecture, landscape palette? There should be an administrative approval trigger for those too. Please add those. Page 5-5: Commented [AC19R18] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 1:51:00 PM Added Page 5-5: Inserted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:19:00 PM Page 5-5: Inserted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:37:00 PM 5.7.1 Page 5-5: Formatted Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 5:43:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.25" Page 5-5: Commented [CF20] Cheri Flores 10/4/2019 2:15:00 PM Exhibit 5.1 is the Conceptual Phasing Plan. Unless you are referring back to the land use plan. In which case, the exhibit reference would need to be corrected. Page 5-5: Commented [AC21R20] Alexsundra Captan 10/9/2019 9:39:00 AM updated Page 5-5: Commented [NC22] Nicole Criste 4/11/2019 1:42:00 PM See Section 6.5 above. This is inconsistent with that Section, and that Section should apply, not this one. Header and footer changes Page 5-1: Deleted Alexsundra Captan 10/30/2019 3:57:00 PM of 5 Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes Summary of Comments on Microsoft Word - 12184-01 Traffic Phasing Report.docx Page: 1 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/30/2020 4:11:24 PM General Comment: 1. The constant reference to the previous TIA, including mitigation measures such as on-site improvements, needs to be centralized into one document. The two studies can easily be combined, given that the last analysis was a single-phase analysis. We also need a master list of on- and off-site mitigation in this document. 2. Required improvements are mitigation measures. They all need to be in Section 7. 3. Assumption is made that the 40 foot paved section is adequate for all phases of development. There is no substantiation for this, and no discussion of when full off-site improvements will be required, based on ambient growth+ cumulative. The trips generated by this project exceed the capacity of a sub-standard two lane roadway on both Jefferson and Avenue 62. This analysis needs to describe when,if no other development occurs, the project builds out off site improvements. 4. The assumption that Jefferson will be in by a certain date assumes that BLM issues a permit. Unless that can be guaranteed, Jefferson cannot be assumed available for at least the first two scenarios. Page: 13 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:22:50 PM Inconsistent with NOP, which calls out two overall phases and 4 construction phases. Please see NOP Exhibits 7 and 8. Either there needs to be an explanation of why the TIA differs from the NOP, or the TIAneeds to be amended to reflect 4 development phases. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:34:15 PM Note that based on the project schedule, this EIR will be released after the July 1 deadline for the preparation of alternative transportation methodology. As such, this TIA will need to conform to the City's policy, once established. Page: 14 Author: consultingplanner Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:34:53 PM Phasing Map is inconsistent with 3.20 NOP maps. See comments above regarding need for consistency. Page: 15 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:36:17 PM The SP max. is 1200 units. This count may be only 3 units over that, but it needs to be 1200. Please find the error and correct. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:54:20 PM What is "interim"? Please define. Also, the assumption must be that the short-term solution will be replaced by a long-term, City compliant roadway section at some point. This document should clearly state when the permanent solution will be implemented, whether as a needed mitigation, or a project feature. Author: nsc Subject: Highlight Date: 3/24/2020 12:36:40 PM Author: nsc Subject: Highlight Date: 3/24/2020 12:36:43 PM Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:51:37 PM Phases should reference reader to exhibit on previous page for Planning Area #s Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:37:36 PM Discussion above calls for 4 phases. Please be consistent. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/24/2020 12:55:09 PM See comment above regarding interim conditions. This project will not be allowed to build out with sub-standard roadways. Page: 26 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/30/2020 3:59:37 PM Need analysis of whether these signals are included in CIP and when funding is programmed, assumingproject will increase deficiencies. Also, show what jurisdiction has control Page: 30 Author: nsc Subject: Highlight Date: 3/26/2020 1:08:22 PM This needs to be a mitigation measure. It is not in Section 7. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:12:58 PM 1. Need an analysis of whether these are programmed CIP improvements (by jurisdiction - these are notall LQ intersections). 2. If not CIP funded, need to know how they will be built. 3. Need to describe how much worse the project contribution is, and assign fair-share. 4. If improvements are not CIP funded, there is an existing significant impact. How will it be mitigated to LTS? Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:14:21 PM See previous comment. Is this CIP funded, and if not what is the project's contribution and how does it get fixed? Page: 38 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:18:55 PM Is there ROW? One lane in each direction is 24 feet. What is the extra 16 for? Page: 39 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:28:07 PM See previous comment under Existing Conditions. Page: 40 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:28:42 PM All this belongs in Section 7. Page: 43 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:37:53 PM In addition to comments below, see comments in Section 3 that apply. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:34:26 PM north side? Page: 59 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:38:03 PM In addition to comments below, see comments in Section 3 that apply. Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 1:53:14 PM north? Page: 75 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 3:48:32 PM This requirement will be in place before the EIR is released. We need to address as a team how the project will address alternative impact analysis. Page: 76 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 3:51:21 PM This needs to be better explained. There is no retail in this project, and the jobs will be limited to servicejobs in the resort industry. The project proposes no housing that will be affordable to that population. Therefore, any reduction from the high end, which is not explained either, is unsubstantiated. Page: 77 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 3:55:43 PM Is this related to internal capture in trip generation? Internal capture represents 5.8% of total trips. The reduction taken is 9%? Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 3:59:03 PM This does not resolve the issue. If the City settles on a 15% reduction in VMT, which is what I've read elsewhere for a target, then this project has significant traffic impacts. Page: 79 Author: nsc Subject: Sticky Note Date: 3/26/2020 4:07:04 PM See previous comments regarding consolidation of all improvements in this section, and addressing CIP/DIF installations.