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2021-02-19 INCOMPLETE LETTER 1 February 19, 2021 Sent via email Lou Miramontes Hofmann Land Development Company 3000 Oak Road, Suite 200 Walnut Creek, CA 94597 SUBJECT: COMPLETENESS AND DESIGN REVIEW FOR TRAVERTINE SPECIFIC PLAN PROJECT GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0002, ZONE CHANGE 2017-0002, SPECIFIC PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0004, TENTATIVE TRACT MAP 2017-0008, ENVIRONMENTAL ASSESSMENT 2017-0008 Dear Mr. Miramontes: On October 30, 2020, we provided you with a letter indicating that the above-mentioned applications were incomplete and gave an update of what was still missing from the application package. The following items are still pending: • Administrative Draft Environmental Impact Report (EIR) Since the pending items above have not been received, your applications are deemed incomplete. Once these items have been received, the applications can be deemed complete. Additionally, a Development Agreement application was determined to be required per the Preapplication Review letter dated June 22, 2017. This application has not been submitted to date. Please work with City staff to submit the application. We won’t be able to circulate the Draft EIR until we get this application and a draft document with proposed deal points. GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0002 AND ZONE CHANGE 2017-0002 Staff received a resubmittal of the General Plan Amendment (GPA) and Zone Change (ZC) application materials, including the GPA and ZC justification and maps, on December 15, 2020. Staff has reviewed and provided comments in the Word files of the documents in Track Changes. The comments can be found in eTrakit, within the attachments of the respective applications and are labeled 2ND REVIEW COMMENTS – ZC and 3RD REVIEW COMMENTS – GPA. 2 Fiscal Impact Study Staff received a resubmittal of the fiscal impact study on January 19, 2021. Staff has reviewed and comments are within the document posted in the MP2017-0007 case attachments labeled as FIA Summary (Travertine 1-15-21)-city comments 2-28-21. SPECIFIC PLAN AMENDMENT 2017-0001 Staff received a resubmittal of the specific plan document on December 9, 2020. Staff is still reviewing Chapters 4 and 5. Comments on Chapters 1-3 are provided in the Word file of the document. The comments can be found in eTrakit, within the attachments of the Specific Plan case and are labeled 5TH REVIEW COMMENTS -SP CH 1-3. Comments on Chapters 4 and 5 will be provided by March 8, 2021. TENTATIVE TRACT MAP 2017-0008 In October and December 2020, staff received several revised documents in relation to the tentative tract map case including: • Tentative Tract Map • Preliminary Precise Grading Plan • Preliminary Hydrology Study • Water Quality Management Plan • Updated Geotechnical Report • Sewer and Water Exhibits • Drainage Master Plan (Received in December 2020) Reviews were initiated December 10, 2020 and have been completed. Comments for the Tentative Tract Map, Preliminary Precise Grading Plan and Water Quality Management Plan are in the attachments in eTrakit in the Tentative Tract Map case and are labelled as follows: • 3RD REVIEW CORRECTIONS – TTM • 3RD REVIEW CORRECTIONS – PGP • 3RD REVIEW CORRECTIONS – WQMP Preliminary comments on the Drainage Master Plan and Preliminary Hydrology Study are below and in eTrakit. Final comments will be provided by March 8, 2021, when peer review of the studies is complete. • Drainage Master Plan: o Provide Engineer stamp and signature. o Should be reviewed by CVWD and provide CVWD approval. o Further comments to be provided when peer review of the study is complete. 3 • Preliminary Hydrology Study: o Provide Engineer stamp and signature. o Per Engineering Bulletin 06-16 (attached), the design storm shall be the 100- year storm event that produces the most volume from the 1, 3, 6, or 24hr storms. o On hydrology exhibit, show 100yr WSEL, basin bottom and top elevations. Basins deeper than 6ft are not permitted in un-gated communities. Max. water depth shall not exceed 19ft deep. See engineering bulletin for requirement on maintenance access ramp and benches around the basin. o Please show that basins are capable of percolating the entire 100-year storm in less than 48 hours. See engineering bulletin for allowable percolation rate. o Drywell shall be installed in the bottom of basins for nuisance water. o Provide emergency overflow route for the basins. o Provide CVWD preliminary approval for assumption that CVWD will allow discharge of the project's flow to the area behind Dike #4 (page 3). The Preliminary Landscape Plan is still pending. Please submit as it becomes available. ENVIRONMENTAL ASSESSMENT 2017-0008 Portions of the Draft EIR were submitted in May 2018 as listed below: • Chapter 1-Executive Summary • Chapter 2-Introduction • Chapter 3-Project Description • Sections of Chapter 4-Environmental Impact Analysis The remaining portions, as listed below, were not submitted. • Sections of Chapter 4-Environmental Impact Analysis o Aesthetics o Biological Resources o Public Services o Utilities and Service Systems • Chapter 5-Other CEQA Required Sections • Chapter 6-Alternatives to the Proposed Project • Chapter 7-EIR Preparation Due to project changes as noted above and changes in the CEQA guidelines since 2018, all portions of the Draft EIR need to be updated and resubmitted. 4 Technical studies were submitted to the City in May 2018 with the portions of the Draft EIR. Staff received several revised studies in April 2020 and provided comments in June 2020. Staff received another round of revised studies in January 2021. The status of studies listed below is noted after the name of each study. • Land Evaluation and Site Assessment (LESA) o Please revise with new project information • Air Quality Impact Analysis o Staff is currently reviewing and will provide comments by March 8, 2021 • Jurisdictional Delineation and Biological Study o Please resubmit once revised. • Supplemental Cultural Resources Technical Report o Staff is currently reviewing and will provide comments by March 8, 2021 • Geotechnical Report o Staff received updated study October 16, 2020 • Soils Report o Needs to include offsites, please revise to include offsites • Greenhouse Gas Analysis o Staff is currently reviewing and will provide comments by March 8, 2021 • Travertine Radius Map Report o Needs to include offsites, please revise to include offsites • Hydrology and Debris Production Report o Applicant should consult with CVWD on the need for revision • Existing Off-Site Flood Risk Assessment Report o Applicant should consult with CVWD on the need for revision • Flood Hazard Analysis for Devil Canyon o Applicant should consult with CVWD on the need for revision • Noise Impact Analysis o Staff is currently reviewing and will provide comments by March 8, 2021 • Traffic Impact Analysis and VMT Analysis o Staff is currently reviewing and will provide comments by March 8, 2021 • Water Supply Assessment o Applicant should consult with CVWD on the need for revision These studies will need to be updated as noted above, incorporate the revised tentative tract map and changes in CEQA guidelines since 2018. Staff is happy to discuss how extensive the changes would need to be for each report. 5 If you have any questions, please contact me at (760) 777-7067. Sincerely, Cheri L. Flores, Planning Manager Design and Development Department cc. Mark Rogers, TRG Land Danny Castro, Design and Development Director 2ND REVIEW COMMENTS - ZC Main document changes and comments Page 1: Deleted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:21:00 PM PROPOSED JEFFERSON STREET .... /H Existing Zoning Plan Proposed Zoning Plan Zoning Acres Un its Acres Units Low Density Residential 382.2 1526 301.3 442 Medium Density Residential 89.3 758 Medium High Density Residential 84.4 774 Neighborhood Commercial 10.0 Tourist Commercial 30.9 71.8 Golf Course 377 .5 153.4 Open Space 4.1 226.6 Master Plan Roadways 20.1 35.1 Total 909.2 1526 877.5 1200 AVENUE62 1I ' Section Break (Next Page) Page 1: Inserted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:22:00 PM Proposed Zoning Plan City of La Quinta - Page 1: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/14/2020 2:32:00 PM Indent: First line: 0.5" Page 1: Formatted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:23:00 PM Centered Page 2: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/14/2020 2:32:00 PM Indent: First line: 0.5" Page 2: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:16:00 PM - Page 2: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:16:00 PM – Page 2: Inserted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:23:00 PM Page 2: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:16:00 PM Existing Page 2: Inserted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:23:00 PM Zoning Plan Page 2: Formatted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:24:00 PM Centered Page 3: Deleted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:22:00 PM Existing Zoning Plan Proposed Zoning Plan Zoning Acres Unit s Acres Units Low Density Residential 382.2 1526 301.3 442 Medium Density Residential 89.3 758 Medium High DensityHigh-Density Residential l 84.4 774 Neighborhood Commercial 10.0 Tourist Commercial 30.9 71.8 Golf Course 377.5 153.4 Open Space 4.1 226.6 Master Plan Roadways 20.1 35.1 Total 909.2 1526 877.5 1200 AVENUE 62 Section Break (Continuous) 1' E::::::J E Page 9: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:20:00 PM High-Density Page 3: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:18:00 PM Not Strikethrough Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:23:00 PM , Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:24:00 PM and a Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:24:00 PM , Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:23:00 PM GPA 08-113) Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:24:00 PM Development Agreement, Tentative Tract Map Page 3: Commented [CF1] Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:07:00 PM We still need this application. Please submit ASAP. Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:24:00 PM Environmental Impact Report Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:23:00 PM (ZC 08-133) Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:51:00 PM landscaping.. Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:51:00 PM landscaping Page 4: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:25:00 PM , and access to pedestrian walkways, providing a walkable community for the residents Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:51:00 PM . Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:23:00 AM gated Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:53:00 PM Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:53:00 PM Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:55:00 PM Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:59:00 PM Heading 1 Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:54:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:59:00 PM Heading 1, Space Before: 0 pt Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:24:00 AM As stated above, nd Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:24:00 AM An Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:25:00 AM delete the gated portion of Jefferson Street within the project, and the deletion of Avenue 62 west of the hypothetical southerly extension of Madison Street, and the Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:25:00 AM e Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:25:00 AM ion Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:25:00 AM the extension Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:12:00 PM 0 Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:12:00 PM 2 Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:25:00 AM for public use. 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Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:59:00 PM Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:59:00 PM Heading 1, Left, Indent: Left: 0", Right: 0", Space Before: 0 pt Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:59:00 PM Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:28:00 AM 380 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 9:28:00 AM 358 Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:08:00 PM s Page 5: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:50:00 PM Font: Bold Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:00:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:15:00 PM 153 Page 5: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:45:00 PM 122 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:15:00 PM 122 Page 5: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:45:00 PM 236.1 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:15:00 PM Page 5: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:45:00 PM and 122 acres of golf course Page 5: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:45:00 PM / golf, 162 152 acres of restricted open space, 864 acres of recreational open space Page 5: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:45:00 PM Right: 0" Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:07:00 AM 152 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:37:00 AM 8 Page 6: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 5:03:00 PM . Page 6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/20/2021 10:53:00 AM GOAL H-2 Assist in the creation and provision of resources to support housing for lower and moderate-income households. Consistency Analysis: The Specific Plan is designed to provide a range of housing types and densities at varying price points that will help meet the anticipated demand for housing within different economic segments of the City. Page 6: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:57:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) w Page 6: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:57:00 PM Right: 0.49" Page 6: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:57:00 PM w Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:53:00 PM , if necessary. Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:53:00 PM . Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:38:00 AM 163 Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:38:00 AM 152 Page 7: Commented [CF2] Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:32:00 PM The GPA doc shows 163 acres. Please correct whichever document is correct. Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:38:00 AM with Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:38:00 AM that Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:00:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:54:00 PM We have satisfied all AB 52 consultation and have redesigned our project Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:54:00 PM The project has been redesigned Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:43:00 AM as identified in the project EIR Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:16:00 PM as identified inthe project EIR. Page 7: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:34:00 PM , if necessary. Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:41:00 PM , if necessary. Page 7: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:41:00 PM Indent: Left: 0" Page 7: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:19:00 PM Justified, Indent: Left: 0.99", Right: 0.49", Space Before: 1.2 pt, Line spacing: Multiple 1.08 li, Tab stops: 2.22", Left + 2.95", Left + 4.17", Left + 4.88", Left + 5.68", Left + 6.73", Left Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:40:00 AM 163 Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:40:00 AM 152 Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:19:00 PM and an Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:19:00 PM and an Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:40:00 AM 8 Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 10:40:00 AM 6 Page 8: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:36:00 PM The GPA Statement shows 301 acres for habitat and 60 acres for recreational. Please correct to make them both statements consistent Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Page 8: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Heading 1, Indent: Left: 0", Right: 0.51" Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Page 8: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Heading 1, Right: 0.51" Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Page 8: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:01:00 PM Heading 1, Right: 0.51", Space Before: 0 pt Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:50:00 PM xxx Page 8: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 1:50:00 PM larger area related to the Middle North and Middle South streams Page 8: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:55:00 PM to Page 9: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:23:00 PM Page 9: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:21:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.99", First line: 0.01" Page 9: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:25:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.99" Page 9: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:56:00 PM ’s Page 9: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:02:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) Header and footer changes Text Box changes Header and footer text box changes Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 12:52:00 PM Font: Bold Footnote changes Endnote changes TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION 3RD REVIEW COMMENTS GPA Main document changes and comments Page 1: Inserted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:16:00 PM Proposed General Plan Page 1: Formatted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:17:00 PM Font: (Default) +Body (Calibri), 14 pt, Bold, Italic Page 1: Commented [CF1] Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 5:02:00 PM Review comments on these exhibits in SP and apply those comments here. Page 1: Inserted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:17:00 PM TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION City of La Quinta - Existing General Plan TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 1: Formatted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:17:00 PM Font: (Default) +Body (Calibri), 14 pt, Bold, Italic Page 3: Deleted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:13:00 PM Page 3: Formatted Hilary Juberg 10/13/2020 1:13:00 PM Border: Bottom: (Single solid line, Auto, 0.5 pt Line width) Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:02:00 AM Font: Bold Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 3: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:40:00 AM contrivance Page 3: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:40:00 AM convey Page 3: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:32:00 AM The removal of Jefferson Street as General Plan roadway south of the hypothetical westerly extension of Avenue 60 to a private gated road. The removal of Avenue 62 west of the hypothetical southerly extension of Madison Street. Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM south of 1. Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 5:03:00 PM 1. The realignment of the Jefferson Street extension on the General Plan Circulation Plan to be consistent with the alignment proposed in the Travertine Development. 1. Page 3: Formatted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 5:03:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.32", Hanging: 0.25", Right: 0", Space Before: 0 pt, No bullets or numbering, Tab stops: Not at 0.63" Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM . 1. Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM , 1. Page 3: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 11:13:00 AM Major Community Facilities; 1. Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM T 1. Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/1/2021 4:58:00 PM TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION t 1. Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 1:46:00 PM Justified Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM , Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM an Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM a Page 3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM , Tentative Tract Map, Development Agreement Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM Page 3: Commented [CF2] Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:05:00 PM We still need this application, please submit ASAP Page 3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:41:00 PM Amendment Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:13:00 AM Font: Bold Page 3: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:13:00 AM Font: Bold Page 3: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:16:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 3: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:44:00 AM high quality Page 3: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:44:00 AM high-quality Page 3: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:16:00 PM Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:16:00 PM Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:16:00 PM Indent: Left: 0.57", No bullets or numbering Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:13:00 AM Font: Bold Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:45:00 AM s Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:13:00 AM Font: Bold Page 4: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:44:00 PM , and Page 4: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 3:44:00 PM . Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:46:00 AM All residential development has Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:46:00 AM On-street bike lanes will make it convenient to ride around the project for exercise and local transportation. A Class II bikeway will be constructed on the Jefferson Street for the use and enjoyment of Travertine residents. Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 4: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:26:00 PM gated Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:48:00 AM As stated above, nd amendment to the General Plan will be required to delete the gated portion of Jefferson Street within the project, and the deletion of Avenue 62 west of the hypothetical southerly extension of Madison Street, and the termination of Madison Street south of Avenue 62. Page 4: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:17:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 4: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:07:00 PM 380 Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:07:00 PM 358 Page 4: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:17:00 PM Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:17:00 PM Page 5: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 9:54:00 AM s Page 5: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:13:00 AM Font: Bold Page 5: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:08:00 PM 153 Page 5: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:46:00 PM 60 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:08:00 PM 60 Page 5: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:46:00 PM 57 Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:08:00 PM Page 5: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:47:00 PM recreational Page 5: Moved from page 5 (Move #1) JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:09:00 PM / golfrecreational, 301 acres of natural open space 162 acres of restricted open space, 64 acres of recreational open space, with a resort and spa that will offer various recreational activities. All residential development has access to pedestrian walkways, providing a walkable community for the residents. On-street bike lanes will make it convenient to ride around the project for exercise and local transportation. A Class II bikeway will be constructed on the Jefferson Street for the use and enjoyment of La Quinta residents TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 5: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:47:00 PM / Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/14/2020 2:11:00 PM golf Page 5: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:47:00 PM recreational Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 10/14/2020 2:11:00 PM recreational Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:10:00 PM Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:09:00 PM Page 5: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:08:00 PM 301 acres of natural open space Page 5: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:59:00 PM This doesn’t match the land use table above. Please reconcile. Also, are the neighborhood parks and trails included in the open space total of 358 acres? Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:08:00 PM 162 acres of restricted open space, 64 acres of recreational open space, Page 5: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:29:00 PM All residential development has access to pedestrian walkways, providing a walkable community for the residents. On-street bike lanes will make it convenient to ride around the project for exercise and local transportation. A Class II bikeway will be constructed on the Jefferson Street for the use and enjoyment of La Quinta residents Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:17:00 PM Page 5: Moved to page 5 (Move #1) JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:09:00 PM / golf, 162 acres of restricted open space, 64 acres of recreational open space, with a resort and spa that will offer various recreational activities. Page 5: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:17:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 5: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 6: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/20/2021 10:52:00 AM GOAL H-2 Assist in the creation and provision of resources to support housing for lower and moderate-income households. Consistency Analysis: The Specific Plan is designed to provide a range of housing types and densities at varying price points that will help meet the anticipated demand for housing within different economic segments of the City. 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Please correct to make both statements consistent. Page 7: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 5:00:00 PM Mention how much is for habitat here since we are talking about protecting habitat. So maybe refer to the amount of open space being used for habitat rather than calling it restricted open space. Page 7: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:01:00 AM Font: Bold Page 7: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:33:00 PM with Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:24:00 AM We have satisfied all AB 52 consultation and have redesigned our Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:27:00 AM The Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:27:00 AM has been redesigned Page 7: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:19:00 AM Font: Bold Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 10/1/2020 2:20:00 PM Section Break (Next Page) TRAVERTINE GENERAL PLAN AMENDMENT APPLICATION Page 7: Formatted JoAnne Sturges 9/30/2020 10:19:00 AM Font: Bold Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:11:00 PM 163 Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:11:00 PM 301 Page 7: Deleted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:11:00 PM 64 Page 7: Inserted JoAnne Sturges 12/15/2020 1:11:00 PM 60 Page 7: Commented [CF6] Cheri Flores 12/22/2020 4:35:00 PM Above in BIO-1, 163 acres is listed. The ZC Statement shows 152 acres for habitat and 84 acres for recreational. Please correct to make consistent. Also the land use table above says that there are 206 acres recreational. 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If allowed, will it be authorized in both north and south projects? Author: aferreira Subject: Highlight Date: 2/18/2021 4:01:25 PM -08'00' Page: 4 Author: aferreira Subject: Highlight Date: 2/18/2021 4:01:54 PM -08'00' Author: aferreira Subject: Sticky Note Date: 2/18/2021 4:03:01 PM -08'00'Regarding Villas, what are these branded as? IE luxry? to warrant such a high rate? Page: 12 Author: aferreira Subject: Sticky Note Date: 2/18/2021 4:09:02 PM -08'00'Will this be gated with own security? That might reduce police and code compliance costs for minor issues Author: aferreira Subject: Highlight Date: 2/18/2021 4:09:08 PM -08'00' 5TH REVIEW COMMENTS -SP CH 1-3 Main document changes and comments Page 1.1-0: Style Definition Cheri Flores 2/19/2021 9:46:00 AM Heading 3,Heading-3 Page 1.1-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 1-18 Page 1.1-2: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 1-17 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-51 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-45 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-51 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-45 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-53 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-47 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-53 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-47 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-53 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-47 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-53 Page 1.1-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM 3-47 Page 1.1-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 7/11/2022 1:52:00 PM Error! 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Pick one and use consistently. Please check throughout. Page 1-1: Commented [AC2R1] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 2:14:00 PM Specific Plan has been capitalized and replaced with Specific Plan Amendment. All future mentions of this document are referred as Amendment Page 1-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:21:00 PM This amendment supersedes the original Specific Plan and will be the governing document for the project area. Page 1-1: Commented [CF3] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:16:00 PM Please insert the Purpose and Authority sections from Section 2. Also identify the regulations that allow SP, ie government code and municipal codes from Section 2. Once the information from Section 2 is incorporated into Section 1 please delete Section 2 Also include summary of the sections, ie. Section 1 does this, Section 2 does this, etc. Also please include a brief summary that states that this is an amendment to the original specific plan and reduces project area from original. Page 1-1: Commented [AC4R3] A CAPTAN 4/17/2019 1:14:00 PM Text added Page 1-1: Commented [CF5] Cheri Flores 4/5/2019 8:58:00 AM Specific Plans are adopted by Resolution. Page 1-1: Commented [AC6R5] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 3:16:00 PM What would be the adoption process for an Amendment? 9.240.010 Specific plan review. Uses the word adopted? Is this correct to use and reference? Page 1-1: Commented [CF7R5] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 2:50:00 PM Adopt is the correct word. Page 1-1: Commented [AC8R5] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 9:09:00 AM accepted Page 1-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:29:00 PM Section 1. Introduction: This section summarizes the authority for preparing specific plans and contains the project description and history as well as development objectives. Page 1-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:30:00 PM Font: Bold Page 1-2: Commented [CF9] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:30:00 PM I realize this is Section 1 but it’s helpful to briefly summarize what this section is too. The text I added is sufficient. Page 1-2: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:42:00 PM Section 6. General Plan Consistency Analysis: This section provides an analysis of the consistency of the Specific Plan with the goals and policies of the City’s General Plan. Page 1-2: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:44:00 PM Font: Bold Page 1-2: Commented [CF10] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:43:00 PM My apologies in overlooking this. All that is needed here is to copy what you have in the GPA statement and include here also. Page 1-3: Commented [CF11] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:04:00 PM Check all exhibit numbers throughout. Some exhibits that were previously in this section may not be needed anymore due to text removal, ie. Geology and hydrology related exhibits. Page 1-3: Commented [AC12R11] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:54:00 PM Updated Page 1-6: Commented [CF13] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:32:00 PM Is there a reason why the project site doesn’t include the entire Madison extension up to Avenue 60? Page 1-9: Commented [CF14] Cheri Flores 2/27/2019 3:39:00 PM Move these after the project description Page 1-9: Commented [AC15R14] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 10:41:00 AM Moved Page 1-9: Commented [CF16] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:21:00 PM Please define what the pattern of organization pertains to. Organization of what? Page 1-9: Commented [AC17R16] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 2:37:00 PM The pattern of the organization pertains to the physical design of the project Page 1-9: Commented [CF18] Cheri Flores 4/4/2019 12:22:00 PM These seem to reflect CEQA checklist items and copied GP goals. What are the project’s goals? Page 1-9: Commented [AC19R18] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 10:41:00 AM Updated Page 1-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:35:00 PM n Page 1-10: Commented [NC20] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 3:15:00 PM Add footnote; reference specific document or correspondence. Page 1-10: Commented [AC21R20] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:00:00 PM added Page 1-10: Commented [CF22R20] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:45:00 PM Thank you. Page 1-11: Commented [CF23] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:10:00 PM 13 kv what? Please say what you are referring to, lines or power, etc. Page 1-11: Commented [AC24R23] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 2:26:00 PM ADDED Page 1-11: Commented [NC25] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 3:19:00 PM Reference SP section and subsection where these standards are described. Page 1-11: Commented [AC26R25] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:01:00 PM ADDED Page 1-11: Commented [NC27] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 3:20:00 PM Where does it occur now? Page 1-11: Commented [AC28R27] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:00:00 PM ADDED Page 1-12: Commented [CF29] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:01:00 PM Renumber exhibit Page 1-12: Commented [AC30R29] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:55:00 PM Updated Page 1-15: Commented [NC31] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 3:29:00 PM Add footnote. Cite specific document or correspondence. Page 1-15: Commented [CF32R31] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:12:00 PM Please don’t forget to provide citation. Page 1-15: Commented [AC33R31] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 1:31:00 PM added Page 1-15: Commented [CF34] Cheri Flores 7/26/2019 4:12:00 PM Not sure why this is highlighted, please resolve this. Page 1-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:38:00 PM Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:38:00 PM Amendment Page 1-17: Commented [CF35] Cheri Flores 4/5/2019 9:25:00 AM Change the title from “Proposed Specific Plan” to “Proposed Amendment” Page 1-17: Commented [AC36R35] A CAPTAN 4/11/2019 9:53:00 AM UPDATED Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:39:00 PM Neighborhood Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:40:00 PM Neighborhood Commercial Removed Page 1-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:41:00 PM Resort/Spa Mixed Use, Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:41:00 PM (including Resort/Spa Mixed Use) Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:46:00 PM a Page 1-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:46:00 PM s Page 1-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:41:00 PM C Page 1-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:41:00 PM c Page 1-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:45:00 PM Resort/Spa Mixed Use, Page 1-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:46:00 PM (including Resort/Spa Mixed Use) Page 1-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:13:00 PM south of  Page 1-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:47:00 PM Line spacing: single Page 1-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:47:00 PM Line spacing: single Page 1-18: Commented [CF37] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:01:00 PM Renumber exhibits based on text changes, removals and additions Page 1-18: Commented [AC38R37] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:56:00 PM updated Page 1-18: Commented [NC39] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:00:00 PM Correct throughout Page 1-18: Commented [AC40R39] A CAPTAN 4/10/2019 3:48:00 PM Updated Page 1-19: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:53:00 PM Page 1-19: Commented [CF41] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 2:52:00 PM The small RL piece on the west (circle #1) is not in the existing SP land use plan. Please remove the yellow fill from both Exhibits 1.8 and 1.9. The circled area #2 should be filled in with golf course land use on both Exhibits. Please fill in the existing land uses for circled areas #3&4 also. Page 1-19: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:05:00 PM Page 1-20: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:05:00 PM Page 1-21: Commented [CF42] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:14:00 PM Remove the existing boundary for clarity and consistency with Exhibit 1.11 Page 2-1: Commented [CF43] Cheri Flores 7/30/2019 11:02:00 AM Let’s use Exhibit 2.2 for the land use plan, rename it Exhibit 2.1 and remove Exhibit 2.1. They are both basically the same. You can put the acreages on Exhibit 2.2. Please be sure to cite the lot configuration exhibits in their respective sections. Page 2-1: Commented [CF44] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:25:00 PM When I add the acreages on the map, I get 379. Please check. The Planning Area summary table identifies PA 13 at 26.7 ac but the map shows 26.9 Page 2-1: Commented [CF45] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:28:00 PM I get 855.6 from the map Page 2-3: Commented [CF46] Cheri Flores 1/10/2020 3:23:00 PM Is it 379 or 380? Above is cited as 380, please remain consistent. Page 2-3: Commented [JS47R46] JoAnne Sturges 4/9/2020 2:13:00 PM 379.0 Opens space, as stated in table Page 2-3: Commented [CF48] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM This exhibit does not show trails. They aren’t shown until Exhibit 3.12. If you want to reference them here, please use an exhibit showing the trails and staging areas. Page 2-3: Commented [JS49R48] JoAnne Sturges 4/9/2020 2:25:00 PM Exhibit 2.2 recreation plan added with trails Page 2-3: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:38:00 PM one Page 2-3: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:38:00 PM 1 Page 2-3: Commented [CF50] Cheri Flores 3/29/2019 4:03:00 PM Show where these are on the map, reference the map here Page 2-3: Commented [AC51R50] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:11:00 PM Updated Page 2-3: Commented [CF52R50] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM These are not shown on Exhibit 2.2-see comment above Page 2-3: Commented [JS53R50] JoAnne Sturges 4/9/2020 2:26:00 PM Exhibit 2.2 Recreation plan added Page 2-3: Commented [CF54] Cheri Flores 2/12/2020 9:28:00 AM This exhibit does not show trails. See comment above Page 2-3: Commented [JS55R54] JoAnne Sturges 4/9/2020 2:28:00 PM Exhibit 2.2 Recreation plan added Page 2-5: Commented [CF56] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:06:00 PM Define this term Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:52:00 PM recreation/visitor-serving Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:52:00 PM tourist Page 2-9: Commented [CF57] Cheri Flores 1/10/2020 3:24:00 PM Will there be any other uses since it expanded to 122 acres? If so, please list them. Page 2-9: Commented [JS58R57] JoAnne Sturges 4/10/2020 12:56:00 PM PA 12 is 45.9 acres (the 122 acres was an error) Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:53:00 PM 1.1 Planning Areas Page 2-9: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:53:00 PM Heading 2,Heading Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM ; Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM as shown on Page 2-9: Commented [CF59] Cheri Flores 4/10/2019 8:17:00 AM The explanation is on the next page, not in section 6. Please put discussion in Section 6 and then the reference for section 6 is good here. Page 2-9: Commented [AC60R59] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:21:00 PM Updated Text in Section 6 (Now 5 after 1 ch+2ch) Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:54:00 PM below in Table 3 and Exhibit 2.2 and Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:58:00 PM 2.3 Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:58:00 PM 3.1 Page 2-9: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:59:00 PM Development Regulations & Standards Page 2-9: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:59:00 PM Planning Area Standards Page 2-10: Commented [CF61] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:48:00 PM This table identifies PA 13 as 26.7 ac but map says 26.9, please reconcile. Also the map refers to the roadways as PA 21. Label that here too. Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 3 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 2 Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 3 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 2 Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 3 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 2 Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 3 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 2 Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 3 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:55:00 PM 2 Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:00:00 PM SFD Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:00:00 PM Single Family Detached Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:00:00 PM detached Page 2-11: Commented [CF62] Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:18:00 PM Add a short discussion on the park/clubhouse being planned in PA 5. Page 2-11: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:57:00 PM Heading 4, Space After: 6 pt Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM Residential (RL) Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM Uses (RL) Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:35:00 PM for all permitted uses within Planning Areas 3-5, 7, 8, 10, & 12-16 Page 2-11: Commented [NC63] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:26:00 PM You must add which zone applies. Presumably, it’s RL. Page 2-11: Commented [AC64R63] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:25:00 PM Revised Page 2-11: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:06:00 PM List Paragraph, Bulleted + Level: 1 + Aligned at: 0.25" + Indent at: 0.5" Page 2-11: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 3:57:00 PM Heading 4, Space After: 6 pt Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM Page 2-11: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM - Page 2-11: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:01:00 PM Residential Page 2-12: Commented [NC65] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:30:00 PM Same comment as in first draft: Can any of these product types be built in any of the Single Family Detached – Low Density planning areas? If so, say so. Page 2-12: Commented [AC66R65] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:30:00 PM Added under development standards Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM 5 Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4 Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 5 Page 2-12: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM Superscript Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4 Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:06:00 PM Planning Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:06:00 PM Design and Development Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:06:00 PM ne. Page 2-12: Moved to page 12 (Move #2) Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4Perimeter Streets for the Travertine Specific Plan area are Loop Street ‘A’, Jefferson Street and Avenue 62 and the Madison EVA. Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4 Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 5 Page 2-12: Commented [CF67] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 11:24:00 AM Please add this footnote to the side yard setbacks for all residential development standards tables. Page 2-12: Commented [AC68R67] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:36:00 PM added Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM Page 2-12: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 5 Page 2-12: Moved from page 12 (Move #2) Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4Perimeter Streets for the Travertine Specific Plan area are Loop Street ‘A’, Jefferson Street and Avenue 62 and the Madison EVA. Page 2-12: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:22:00 PM 4 Page 2-13: Commented [CF69] Cheri Flores 7/29/2019 4:21:00 PM Check cross references Page 2-13: Commented [AC70R69] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 1:28:00 PM Is in section 5. Page 2-13: Commented [NC71] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:36:00 PM Again, cite the zone which applies. Are there any conditional uses? Page 2-13: Commented [AC72R71] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 2:41:00 PM no Page 2-13: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:05:00 PM Residential (RM) Page 2-13: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:35:00 PM uses (RM) Page 2-13: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:35:00 PM for permitted uses within Planning Areas 2, 6 and 9 Page 2-13: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:03:00 PM Residential Page 2-14: Commented [NC73] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:37:00 PM Please address comments from 1st draft for entire table. Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Setbacks5 Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Setbacks4 Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Street4 Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Street5 Page 2-14: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:07:00 PM Planning Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:07:00 PM Design and Development Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:03:00 PM Side-loaded garages may encroach up to 5 feet into the front yard setback Page 2-14: Commented [CF74] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:24:00 PM Please show a side loaded garage lot on Exhibit 2.5. Page 2-14: Commented [JS75R74] JoAnne Sturges 4/14/2020 2:00:00 PM The small lot SFD will not allow side loaded garage – need at least a 55’ wide lot. Page 2-14: Commented [CF76R74] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:03:00 PM Ok then I suggest removing the note. Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM 4 Page 2-14: Moved to page 14 (Move #1) Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM 4Perimeter Streets for the Travertine Specific Plan area are Loop Street ‘A’, Jefferson Street and Avenue 62. Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM 5 Page 2-14: Commented [CF77] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 11:24:00 AM Please add this footnote to the side yard setbacks for all residential development standards tables. Page 2-14: Commented [AC78R77] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:37:00 PM added Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Page 2-14: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM 5 Page 2-14: Moved from page 14 (Move #1) Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM 4Perimeter Streets for the Travertine Specific Plan area are Loop Street ‘A’, Jefferson Street and Avenue 62. Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:21:00 PM 4 Page 2-14: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:20:00 PM Page 2-15: Commented [CF79] Cheri Flores 7/30/2019 11:32:00 AM Please put in a description of the PA’s as the rest of the sections have. Page 2-15: Commented [AC80R79] Alexsundra Captan 8/6/2019 2:54:00 PM TO BE UPDATED Page 2-15: Commented [AC81R79] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:28:00 PM added Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM Tourist Commercial (CT) for Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM within Planning Areas 1 and 11 Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM Tourist Commercial Uses (CT) Page 2-17: Commented [NC82] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:38:00 PM Again, cite the zone that applies. Page 2-17: Commented [AC83R82] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 1:33:00 PM Updated Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM will Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM shall Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM will Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:34:00 PM shall Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:35:00 PM shall Page 2-17: Commented [CF84] Cheri Flores 3/21/2019 11:31:00 AM See LQ Municipal Code Section 9.60.310 for development standards for resort residential. The standards there would better suit the Villa use. These standards are for a hotel. Page 2-17: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:17:00 PM Superscript Page 2-17: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:18:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:18:00 PM Page 2-17: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:18:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-17: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:19:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-17: Commented [CF85] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:18:00 PM Should this be 15 feet? Exhibit 2.6 shows 15 foot min rear setbacks. Page 2-17: Commented [JS86R85] JoAnne Sturges 4/10/2020 1:26:00 PM Corrected to 15’ Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:14:00 PM rear Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:14:00 PM side Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:14:00 PM s Page 2-17: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:16:00 PM rear Page 2-17: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:16:00 PM side Page 2-17: Commented [CF87] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:16:00 PM Looks like mechanical equipment can’t be in the side yard setback since it needs a 3 foot clearance and the side setbacks are 3 ft. They’ll need to go in the rear yard setback. Page 2-17: Commented [JS88R87] JoAnne Sturges 4/10/2020 1:28:00 PM corrected Page 2-17: Commented [CF89R87] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:11:00 PM There is no rear yard clearance requirement, only on the sides. We can keep the footnote to say they are allowed only in side yards with that clearance requirement. Some side yards may be more than 3 ft and it could be allowed in those yards. Sorry for confusion. Page 2-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:23:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:23:00 PM Font: 11 pt Page 2-18: Commented [CF90] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:33:00 PM This is what is in Chapter 4 in the recreation plan and on Exhibit 2.7, isn’t it? Page 2-18: Commented [JS91R90] JoAnne Sturges 4/10/2020 1:34:00 PM New Exhibit 2.2 Page 2-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:24:00 PM Font: Bold Page 2-18: Commented [CF92] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:32:00 PM Are there any golf course uses proposed here? Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:33:00 PM Parks and Recreation (PR), Golf Course (GC) and Open Space (OS) for Page 2-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:33:00 PM for Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:33:00 PM within Planning Areas 17, 18, and 19 Page 2-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:33:00 PM Parks and Recreation, PR, and Open Space, OS Page 2-18: Commented [NC93] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:43:00 PM Cite the zone that applies. Page 2-18: Commented [AC94R93] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:19:00 PM Added Page 2-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:24:00 PM Font: Bold Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:24:00 PM 1 Page 2-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:24:00 PM 2 Page 2-18: Formatted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:24:00 PM Font: Bold Page 2-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:25:00 PM Zoning Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:25:00 PM Municipal Page 2-18: Commented [NC95] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:43:00 PM Cite the zone. Page 2-18: Commented [AC96R95] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:18:00 PM Cited above Page 2-18: Commented [CF97] Cheri Flores 12/23/2020 4:37:00 PM Will public access be restricted? Let’s say that here if so. Page 2-18: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:17:00 PM reduction Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:17:00 PM change Page 2-18: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:17:00 PM (CDFW) Page 2-18: Commented [CF98] Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:18:00 PM Say why. You can mention that jurisdictional waters are in this area so that is why the permit/agreement is needed. Page 2-19: Commented [NC99] Consulting Planner 3/29/2019 4:47:00 PM The road in Section 5 should be included here too. Page 2-19: Commented [AC100R99] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:25:00 PM Added Page 2-19: Moved to page 19 (Move #3) Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:20:00 PM  All other uses will be prohibited in this area. Page 2-19: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:20:00 PM  Page 2-19: Moved from page 19 (Move #3) Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:20:00 PM  All other uses will be prohibited in this area. Page 2-19: Commented [CF101] Cheri Flores 4/10/2019 8:24:00 AM I did not see a height up to 75 feet to be specifically permitted in the Code. If you can find the Code section, please cite it. If not, the SP will set the height limit per CVWD requirements. Page 2-19: Commented [AC102R101] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:28:00 PM Note added and revised Page 2-19: Commented [CF103] Cheri Flores 3/25/2019 5:06:00 PM Development will also need to comply with CVMSHCP Adjacency Guidelines Page 2-19: Commented [AC104R103] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:28:00 PM Note added Page 3-1: Commented [NC105] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:55:00 AM This section needs bolstering with graphics in the text. Please put the exhibits throughout instead of at the end of the section for easier reference. Focus on materials, colors and architectural styles. Add a section on prohibited styles and materials for architectural section. Page 3-1: Commented [AC106R105] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:35:00 PM Graphics inserted Page 3-1: Commented [NC107] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:21:00 AM Note previous comment regarding proper capitalization Page 3-1: Commented [AC108R107] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:46:00 PM FIXED Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:23:00 PM residential and tourist commercial Page 3-2: Commented [CF109] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 10:48:00 AM This should be Section 4.4 Architectural Design Guidelines Page 3-2: Commented [AC110R109] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:03:00 PM REVISED Page 3-2: Commented [CF111] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 1:56:00 PM Finish out this list with the resort residential. Page 3-2: Commented [U112R111] User 4/22/2020 12:05:00 PM added Page 3-10: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:25:00 PM Planning Commission Page 3-10: Formatted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:27:00 PM Normal, No bullets or numbering Page 3-10: Formatted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:27:00 PM Normal, No bullets or numbering Page 3-10: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:27:00 PM : Page 3-13: Commented [CF113] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:04:00 PM You may, if you want, include bamboo or glass as appropriate materials. The Municipal Code does so just want to give that option. Page 3-13: Commented [U114R113] User 4/22/2020 12:08:00 PM Added glass Page 3-15: Commented [CF115] Cheri Flores 8/7/2019 11:08:00 AM Please provide a subsection on walls and fences and provide an exhibit with examples. The subsection can go at the end of this section. Page 3-15: Commented [AC116R115] Alexsundra Captan 10/24/2019 11:38:00 AM Added Page 3-15: Commented [CF117] Cheri Flores 4/11/2019 10:48:00 AM Move this to Landscape Design Guidelines Section Page 3-15: Commented [AC118R117] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:03:00 PM moved Page 3-15: Commented [NC119] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:51:00 AM Add plant palette. Should not be an Appendix, but in text. Prohibited plants (see comment below) must also be included in document. Page 3-15: Commented [AC120R119] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:47:00 PM To stay in Appendix Page 3-15: Commented [CF121R119] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:15:00 PM Please put plant palette into this section as previously requested. Page 3-15: Commented [AC122R119] Alexsundra Captan 8/9/2019 2:00:00 PM ADDED Page 3-20: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:52:00 PM Landscape elements will occur throughout the community and unite Travertine under a common design theme and plant palette. General guidelines and design criteria for the community landscape elements are described throughout this section. All landscape plans will be submitted to the City for review and approval. The following Exhibits display conceptual ideas of desert themes and layouts for the Travertine Project. Page 3-20: Commented [NC123] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:41:00 AM Need to add concepts for the homes and the resort/spa. Page 3-20: Commented [AC124R123] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 4:01:00 PM Seen in exhibits 13-14 Page 3-20: Commented [CF125R123] Cheri Flores 8/7/2019 10:47:00 AM These exhibits show concept for streetscapes and don’t show landscape concepts for the resort/spa or for the homes. Please provide this. Local streetscapes need to be addressed. Page 3-20: Commented [AC126R123] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:35:00 PM added Page 3-20: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:51:00 PM The landscaped cross-sections, Exhibits 3.24–3.33, show the relationship of the project land uses to one another and from the built environment to the projects’ natural edges. Page 3-20: Commented [CF127] Cheri Flores 2/19/2021 9:42:00 AM Is there an exterior armored wall or some sort of perimeter flood barrier proposed on the west side to block flood flows? If so, please show on cross-sections and an example exhibit. Page 3-34: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:51:00 PM These landscape elements will occur throughout the community and unite Travertine under a common design theme and plant palette. General guidelines and design criteria for the community landscape elements are described throughout this section. All landscape plans will be submitted to the City for review and approval. The following Exhibits display conceptual ideas of desert themes and layouts for the Travertine Project. The landscaped sections, Exhibits 3.24–3.33, show the relationship of the project land uses to one another and from the built environment to the projects’ natural edges. Page 3-34: Formatted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:54:00 PM Exhibits, Space After: 12 pt Page 3-34: Formatted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:54:00 PM Font: Not Bold Page 3-34: Formatted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 1:54:00 PM Font: 11 pt, Not Bold, Not Italic Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM s Page 3-51: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM in Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM connected to Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM See Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM s Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:35:00 PM . Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:36:00 PM as Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:42:00 PM s Page 3-51: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:42:00 PM Exhibit Page 3-51: Commented [AC128] Alexsundra Captan 9/13/2019 9:49:00 AM gates Page 3-51: Commented [CF129] Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:33:00 PM Not sure what this refers to. This citation shows residential streetscapes. Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:38:00 PM s Page 3-51: Formatted Cheri Flores 2/19/2021 9:46:00 AM Heading 3,Heading-3, Space After: 0 pt Page 3-51: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:42:00 PM See Page 3-51: Commented [CF130] Cheri Flores 3/17/2020 2:28:00 PM Make sure this is consistent with CVMSHCP adjacency guidelines Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:42:00 PM s Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:42:00 PM Exhibit Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:23:00 PM 22 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:23:00 PM 31 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:40:00 PM s Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:24:00 PM 33 Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:24:00 PM 20 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:40:00 PM , Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:04:00 PM , Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:04:00 PM . T Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:04:00 PM t Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:40:00 PM , Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:40:00 PM , Page 3-53: Commented [NC131] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:54:00 AM Move each of these paragraphs to the sub-section to which they apply. Page 3-53: Commented [CF132R131] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:32:00 PM Please incorporate Nicole’s comment from March 2019 above. Or create another section to address these. Page 3-53: Commented [AC133R131] Alexsundra Captan 10/11/2019 2:29:00 PM added Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:41:00 PM and connect to the existing public hiking trail system at the Boo Hoff Trail Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/18/2021 6:41:00 PM See Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:25:00 PM and 3.20 Page 3-53: Commented [NC134] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:51:00 AM See comment above about plant palette and move into document. Page 3-53: Commented [AC135R134] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:58:00 PM Will stay in Appendix Page 3-53: Commented [CF136R134] Cheri Flores 8/5/2019 5:12:00 PM Please insert Plant Palette into this section as previously requested. Page 3-53: Commented [AC137R134] Alexsundra Captan 8/7/2019 2:32:00 PM Inserted. Page 3-53: Commented [NC138] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:48:00 AM That’s fine, but what is the landscape theme for the balance of the golf areas? Page 3-53: Commented [AC139R138] A CAPTAN 6/6/2019 9:31:00 AM updated Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:25:00 PM 30 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:25:00 PM 29 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:22:00 PM 1 Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:22:00 PM 2 Page 3-53: Deleted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:25:00 PM 27 Page 3-53: Inserted Cheri Flores 1/19/2021 4:25:00 PM 32 Page 3-53: Commented [NC140] Consulting Planner 3/31/2019 10:53:00 AM Require smart landscaping systems. Page 3-53: Commented [AC141R140] A CAPTAN 4/12/2019 3:58:00 PM Added Header and footer changes Page 3-1: Inserted Cheri Flores 2/10/2021 9:58:00 AM 3.0 DESIGN GUIDELINES Page 3-1: Deleted Cheri Flores 2/10/2021 9:58:00 AM TRAVERTINE Text Box changes Page 1.1-0: Deleted Hilary Juberg 12/9/2020 1:41:00 PM SPECIFIC PLAN DRAFT – DECEMBER 8, 2020 Page 1.1-0: Inserted Hilary Juberg 12/9/2020 1:41:00 PM SPECIFIC PLAN DRAFT – DECEMBER 9, 2020 Header and footer text box changes Footnote changes Endnote changes 053-TTM-combined.pdf Markup Summary Subject: Arrow Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:38:57 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Arrow (1) Subject: Callout Page Label: [1] M-04 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 1/11/2021 9:41:14 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Callout (5) Subject: Callout Page Label: [1] M-03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 1/11/2021 9:43:00 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Subject: Callout Page Label: [1] M-03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 1/11/2021 9:43:17 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Subject: Callout Page Label: [1] M-09 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:02:16 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Is this private drive access to NAP land? If yes, access easement need to be dedicated to NAP land owners Subject: Callout Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:11:44 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Provide Riverside County approval Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Madison Access Road proposed for Emergency Vehicle Access for Phase 1 Development. Easement Required to be noted where appropriate. Is this private drive access to NAP land? If yes, access easement need to be dedicated to NAP land owners - B Provide Riverside County approval Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 1/11/2021 9:36:32 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. Cloud+ (3) Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 1/11/2021 9:37:08 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:49:47 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: This section of Jefferson Street needs County of Riverside approval Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] I 01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 11:23:11 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Add in Existing and proposed Gen Plan and Zoning Designations PL - CALLOUT (7) Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:18:07 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Riverside County south side Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:18:59 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: City of La Quinta north side Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. - A Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. TH, RANGE 7 EAST AND SECTIONS 4 ANGE 7 EAST, SBM E TRACT37387 This section of Jefferson Street needs County of Riverside approval Add in Existing and proposed Gen Plan and Zoning Designations Riverside County south side City of La Quinta north side Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:37:59 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Roundabouts are planned here. Please show cross-sections. Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:43:29 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Is the Madison EVA following the alignment of the easement after it leaves Travertine property? Please show the alignment up to Ave 60. Will it need a separate license agreement with BOR? Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:57:00 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Is this Section 5 Access easement? Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 9:49:40 AM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Add Desert Sands Unified School District Subject: PL - CLOUD Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:36:48 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: PL - CLOUD (3) Subject: PL - CLOUD Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:36:52 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Roundabouts are planned here. Please show cross-sections. Is the Madison EVA following the alignment of the easement after it leaves Travertine property? Please show the alignment up to Ave 60. Will it need a separate license agreement with BOR? Is this Section 5 Access easement? Add Desert Sands Unified School District Subject: PL - CLOUD Page Label: [1] M-01 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 1/27/2021 3:56:28 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] M-09 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 4:58:02 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Show access and access easement from public street to this NAP area. Text Box (4) Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:06:33 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Show 10ft PUE for all private streets Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] M-15 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:35:19 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: South side of Ave 62 needs County of Riverside approval Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] M-02 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 5:45:38 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Ave 62 cross sections: Per General Plan, 42' ROW and 15' parkway required for Ave 62. Show access and access easement from public street to this NAP area. Show 10ft PUE for all private streets South side of Ave 62 needs County of Riverside approval Ave 62 cross sections: Per General Plan, 42' ROW and 15' parkway required for Ave 62. 053-PPG SET-Combined.pdf Markup Summary Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] 05 Author: AMY YU Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: For retention basins: Show 100yr WSEL and basin top elevation. Basins deeper than 6ft are not permitted in un-gated communities. Max. water depth shall not exceed 19ft deep. Show maintenance access ramp, benches around the basin, and drywells for nuisance water. AMY YU (1) Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] 02 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: City of La Quinta north side CHERI FLORES (3) Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] 03 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Is License agreement from BOR required to cross dike? Subject: PL - CALLOUT Page Label: [1] 02 Author: CHERI FLORES Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Riverside County south side Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 02 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. KOHL HETRICK (16) Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 04 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: For retention basins: Show 100yr WSEL and basin top elevation. Basins deeper than 6ft are not permitted in un-gated communities. Max. water depth shall not exceed 19ft deep. Show maintenance access ramp, benches around the basin, and drywells for nuisance water. City of La Quinta north side Is License agreement from BOR required to cross dike? Riverside County south side PORTION OF THE SE SECTIONS 4 AN PRELIMINA Where a raised median is installed,curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 10 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Street H and I exceed 1,320 linear feet from collector road to Lot 3 connection and service. Fire Access standard requires a secondary point of access/egress for lots located more than 1,320-feet (1/4 mile) for nearest looping connector road with more than 1 path to choose from. *Preferred to show connectivity. ** Street J and service to Lots 1 and 2 are also affected, but if Street I and H are connected, then it becomes the nearest looping connector. Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 05 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet. Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 05 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 04 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet.SDSDSDSDSD SDSDSDSDSDSDSD SD SDSDSDSDSDSDSDSDSDSDSDSD⅊ ⅊ PORTION OF THE SECTION 33, TOWNSHIP 6 SOUTH, RANGE 7 EAST AND SECTIONS 4 AND 5, TOWNSHIP 7 SOUTH, RANGE 7 EAST, SBM PRELIMINARY PRECISE GRADING PLAN Street H and I exceed 1,320 linear feetfrom collector road to Lot 3 connectionand service. Fire Access standardrequires a secondary point ofaccess/egress for lots located more than1,320-feet (1/4 mile) for nearest loopingconnector road with more than 1 path tochoose from.*Preferred to show connectivity.** Street J and service to Lots 1 and 2are also affected, but if Street I and H areconnected, then it becomes the nearestlooping connector. Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet. Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet. Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 04 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] 02 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Provide detail of "Madison Access Road" as identified on Sheets 3, 4, and 5. *Proposed as Phase 1 Emergency Vehicle Access (EVA). Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 05 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Highlight Page Label: [1] 03 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Provide detail of "Madison Access Road" as identified on Sheets 3, 4, and 5. *Proposed as Phase 1 Emergency Vehicle Access (EVA). Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 02 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: [1] 04 Author: KOHL HETRICK Date: 2/24/2021 12:41:01 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet. Where a raised median is installed, curb-to-curb width shall not be less than 24-feet for Fire Access. Per approved Fire Access Master Plan (FCMP2019-0008) minimum clear width shall be 24-feet. 053-WQMP TRV_102220.pdf Markup Summary Subject: PW- TEXT BOX Page Label: 1 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:00:20 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Engineer stamp and signature required AMY YU (35) Subject: Text Box Page Label: 2 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:03:11 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Include Name of Owner/Developer by Company Name Subject: Text Box Page Label: 9 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:13:00 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: This project description should go on page 4. Need to expand on project description Subject: Text Box Page Label: 7 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:16:13 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Place project description on page 6 here instead. Need to expand on description to include i.e., existing conditions, proposed storm drain improvements, number of structures, which design storm is being retained, emergency overflow, etc. Subject: PW- TEXT BOX Page Label: 8 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:16:46 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Soils report is need since basins are propsed Subject: PW- TEXT BOX Page Label: 8 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:17:25 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: list uses Engineer stamp and signature required 2014 WNER'S CERTIFICATION project-specific Water Quality Management Plan (WQMP) ha The project known as Travertine Project in the City of L WQMP is intended to comply with the requirements of City 37387 which includes the requirement for the preparation a MP. undersigned, while owning the property/project described Include Name of Owner/Developer by Company Name arge Facility (see Travertine site map). 100% of the pre and ined behind the dike where they are retained and infiltrate s within the project site are water quality basins designed m event. Anything in excess will be routed to the area behind This project description should go on page 4. Need to expand on project description 2014 White Appendix A of this project-specific WQMP includes a complete co Approval. Appendix B of this project-specific WQMP includes: a. A Vicinity Map identifying the project site and surroundi sufficient detail; and b. A Site Plan for the project. The Site Plan included as par following project features:  Location and identification of all structural BMPs LID/Site Design and Treatment Control BMPs. Place project description on page 6 here instead. Need to expand on description to include i.e., existing conditions, proposed storm drain improvements, number of structures, which design storm is being retained, emergency overflow, etc. required if infiltration BMPs dix E. red, attached remediation pendix H. Soils report is need since basins are propsed list uses Subject: PL-CLOUD/CALLOUT Page Label: 10 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:19:06 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Show impairments on the 303d list for the CVWC. Please also show the beneficial uses for CVSWC and the distance. Subject: Callout Page Label: 10 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:19:29 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Receiving Water is the Coachella Valley Storm Water Channel. Subject: Callout Page Label: 4 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:19:40 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Receiving Water is the Coachella Valley Storm Water Channel Subject: Callout Page Label: 4 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:19:45 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Also indicate disturbed area Subject: Text Box Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:21:16 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: (Pathogens) Subject: Callout Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:22:07 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: per 303d list for CVSWC 2014 Whitewater River Region WQMP eceiving Waters for Urban Runoff from Site Receiving Waters EPA Approved 303(d) List Impairments Designated Beneficial Uses Proximity to RARE Beneficial Use Designated Receiving Waters None *There are no runoffs to the receiving water. 100% of the runoffs is contained behind dike #4. Show impairments on the 303d list for the CVWC. Please also show the beneficial uses for CVSWC and the distance. 2014 Whitewater River Region WQMP Receiving Waters for Urban Runoff from Site Receiving Waters EPA Approved 303(d) List Impairments Designated Beneficial Uses Proximity to RARE Beneficial Use Designated Receiving Waters None *There are no runoffs to the receiving water. 100% of the runoffs is contained behind dike #4. Receiving Water is the Coachella Valley Storm Water Channel. 1-1 766-110-003, 766-110-004, 766-110-007, 766-110-009, 766-120- 001, 766-120-002, 766-120-003, 766-120-006, 766-120-016, 766- 120-018, 766-120-015, 766-120-021, 766-120-023, 766-280-057, 764-280-059, 764-280-061, 753-040-014, 753-040-017, 753-040- 016, 743-050-029, 753-050-007, 753-060-003. 33.60194444, -116.26111111 None – The site retains 100% of the runoffs behind dike #4 855.4 acres Association (HOA) on (POA): Y N Receiving Water is the Coachella Valley Storm Water Channel 764-280-059, 764-280-061, 753-040-014, 753-040-017, 753- 016, 743-050-029, 753-050-007, 753-060-003. 33.60194444, -116.26111111 None – The site retains 100% of the runoffs behind dike #4 855.4 acres rs' Association (HOA) iation (POA): Y N Also indicate disturbed area ant Category P s s (Pathogens) mary Causing Receiving Water Impairment None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 per 303d list for CVSWC Subject: Callout Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:26:09 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Pathogens is Bacteria/Virus Subject: Callout Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:27:36 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Yes for parking lots, specifically petroleum hydrocarbons Subject: Callout Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:31:24 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Show Toxaphene, Dieldrin, DDT, PCB, Toxicity, and Total Ammonia in the "Other" box and No for potential for project and Yes for causing receiving water impairment Subject: Text Box Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:31:57 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Yes Subject: Cloud+ Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:32:37 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: No Subject: PW- TEXT BOX Page Label: 11 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:33:39 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Add footnote that Toxaphene, Dieldrin, DDT, and PCB are banned substances in the U.S. Sediment/ Trash & D Oil & Gre Pathogens Pathogens is Bacteria/Virus III. Pollutants of Concern Table 1. Pollutant of Concern Sum Pollutant Category Potential for Project and/or Existing Site Bacteria/Virus Y Heavy Metals Y Nutrients Y Toxic Organic Compounds N Sediment/Turbidity Y Yes for parking lots, specifically petroleum hydrocarbons Trash & Debris Y Oil & Grease Y Pathogens Y Other (specify pollutant): N/A Show Toxaphene, Dieldrin, DDT, PCB, Toxicity, and Total Ammonia in the "Other" box and No for potential for project and Yes for causing receiving water impairment nt Yes Potential for Project and/or Existing Site Causing Receiving Water Impairment Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 N None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 Y None – 100% Containment behind Dike #4 N/A No 23, 2020 1-7 behind Dike #4 er (specify pollutant): N/A Add footnote that Toxaphene, Dieldrin, DDT, and PCB are banned substances in the U.S. Subject: Callout Page Label: 12 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:40:38 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Is the 100yr storm retained on own property? Subject: Callout Page Label: 12 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:46:38 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: If the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite, you can check yes for this section. Please confirm with engineer who prepared the hydrology study Subject: Callout Page Label: 13 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:46:55 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: If the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite, you can check yes for this section. Please confirm with hydrology study engineer. Subject: Text Box Page Label: 21 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:47:05 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Please confirm with hydrology study engineer that the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite. If so, please just indicate here. Subject: Line Page Label: 21 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:47:28 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Subject: Text Box Page Label: 21 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:47:45 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: N/A This Project meets Cond operat discha conne requir proxim use au Cond plan o Is the 100yr storm retained on own property? 2 IV. Hydrologic Conditions of Co Local Jurisdiction Requires On-Site Retention of Urba Yes The project will be required to retain urban r ordinance (See Table 6 of the WQMP G Authorities Requiring Onsite Retention of Sto to be completed; however, retention facility de be included in Appendix F. If the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite, you can check yes for this section. Please confirm with engineer who prepared the hydrology study 2014 Whitewater Riv V. Best Management Practices This project implements Best Management Practices (BMPs) to address the Po that may potentially be generated from the use of the Project Site. These BMPs and implemented to comply with Section 3.5 of the WQMP Guidance docum Site Design BMP concepts, Source Control, LID/Site Design and, if/where ne Control BMPs as described herein. V.1 SITE DESIGN BMP CONCEPTS, LID/SITE DESIGN AND TREA CONTROL BMPS Local Jurisdiction Requires On-Site Retention of Urban Runoff: Yes The project will be required to retain Urban Runoff onsite in conf ordinance (See Table 6 of the WQMP Guidance document, Authorities Requiring Onsite Retention of Stormwater). The measurable goal has thus been met (100%), and Sections V.1.A need to be completed; however, retention facility design details and If the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite, you can check yes for this section. Please confirm with hydrology study engineer. 2014 Whitewater River Region WQMP Project Site Design BMP Concepts: The project will implement two (2) separate retention/infiltration basins to treat the required stormwater runoff. Runoff from roof drains and other impervious area will be conveyed to each basin by way of drive aisles, streets and underground storm system. Alternative Project Site Design BMP Concepts: The Project is located immediately upstream and adjacent to CVWD Dike #4 Groundwater Recharge facility. The project stormwater runoff will be routed to two on-site retention basins. These basins are sized to capture and infiltrate the 2-year storm event. Stormwater in excess of this will be routed to the area behind Dike #4 where they will be retained and infiltrated. Please confirm with hydrology study engineer that the project is retaining the largest volume of the 100yr (1, 3, 6, or 24hr) storm onsite. If so, please just indicate here. 2014 Whitewater River Region WQMP Project Site Design BMP Concepts: The project will implement two (2) separate retention/infiltration basins to treat the required stormwater runoff. Runoff from roof drains and other impervious area will be conveyed to each basin by way of drive aisles, streets and underground storm system. Alternative Project Site Design BMP Concepts: The Project is located immediately upstream and adjacent to CVWD Dike #4 Groundwater Recharge facility. The project stormwater runoff will be routed to two on-site retention basins. These basins are sized to capture and infiltrate the 2-year storm event. Stormwater in excess of this will be routed to the area behind Dike #4 where they will be retained and infiltrated. N/A Subject: Text Box Page Label: 13 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:48:48 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: If yes is checked, sections V.1.A and V.1.B do not need to be completed Subject: Callout Page Label: 23 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:52:09 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Table 5 do not need to be completed since you checked this square Subject: PW - CALLOUT Page Label: 25 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:53:00 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Should be zero since you are not proposing any treatment control. Subject: Text Box Page Label: 36 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:55:30 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Need to show distance from project to CVSWC Subject: Text Box Page Label: 112 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:59:28 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Uncheck hillside residence. Your project will be home subdivision and parking lots. Check if there will be restaurants also Subject: Text Box Page Label: 112 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 8:59:49 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: also show disturbed area tention of Urban Runoff: to retain Urban Runoff onsite in conformance with local f the WQMP Guidance document, "Local Land use ite Retention of Stormwater). The LID/Site Design been met (100%), and Sections V.1.A and V.1.B do not ver, retention facility design details and sizing calculations ix F, and '100%' should be entered into Column 3 of Table ted. QMP documents the LID/Site Design BMPs and, if/where Ps that will be implemented on the project to meet the 3.5.1 of the WQMP Guidance document. Section 3.5.1 e Design Concepts and BMPs, and includes requirements MPs. Further, sub-section 3.5.1.1 specifically requires that If yes is checked, sections V.1.A and V.1.B do not need to be completed Justification of infeasibility for sub-areas not addressed with LID/Site Design BM Not applicable – all on-site runoff from drainage areas are being captured and conveye site retention/infiltration basins for storage and infiltration (treatment). No surface flo into the local MS4 system is anticipated. V.1.B TREATMENT CONTROL BMPS Conventional Treatment Control BMPs shall be implemented to address the project's P Concern as required in WQMP Section 3.5.1 where, and to the extent that, Section demonstrated that it is infeasible to meet these requirements through implementation Design BMPs. The LID/Site Design BMPs described in Section V.1.A of this project-spec completely address the 'Treatment Control BMP requirement' for the entire (and where applicable, entire existing site) as required in Section 3.5.1.1 of Guidance document. Supporting documentation for the sizing of these LID/ BMPs is included in Appendix F. *Section V.1.B does not need to be comple The LID/Site Design BMPs described in Section V.1.A of this project-specific NOT completely address the 'Treatment Control BMP requirement' for the en site (or where applicable, entire existing site) as required in Section 3.5.1.1 of *Section V.1.B must be completed. Table 5 do not need to be completed since you checked this square 514.2 10 Should be zero since you are not proposing any treatment control. Need to show distance from project to CVSWC (other information to help identify loc Indicate type of project. X Date Project-Specific WQM Uncheck hillside residence. Your project will be home subdivision and parking lots. Check if there will be restaurants also t disturbing > 5,000 sq. ft. > 5,000 sq. ft. 0 housing units . ft. or ≥ 25 parking spaces res also show disturbed area Subject: Text Box Page Label: 112 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 9:00:13 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: no, this is undeveloped site Subject: Text Box Page Label: 112 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 9:00:31 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: no Subject: Text Box Page Label: 56 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 9:03:43 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Please also include entire hydrology study Subject: Text Box Page Label: 55 Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 9:04:09 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Include the preliminary soils report submitted to City for review Subject: Text Box Page Label: [1] Paper Author: AMY YU Date: 1/15/2021 9:12:29 PM Status: Color: Layer: Space: Provide legend and use hatching to show paved areas (streets), emergency overflow for retention basins, show future residential sites, open space, etc See page 4 for list of items to be shown on the WQMP Site Plan rbing > 5,000 sq. ft. on ≥ 10 housing units 000 sq. ft. or ≥ 25 parking spaces 5.4 acres s 6 s s no, this is undeveloped site no Structural BMP and/or Retention Facility Sizin and Please also include entire hydrology study Include the preliminary soils report submitted to City for review Provide legend and use hatching to show paved areas (streets), emergency overflow for retention basins, show future residential sites, open space, etc See page 4 for list of items to be shown on the WQMP Site Plan