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Re: Comment on the DEIR for the proposed La Quinta Wavepark development
Novak, Philip <philip.novak@dominican.edu>
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Dear Ms. Criste,
Thank you. By the way, three LQ employees on the cc list at the end of my letter to you did not
receive my email as the email address I had for all three of them, cdd@la-quinta.org, was not
valid. If you would, please forward my email to them (Cheri and Carlos Flores and Siji
Hernandez).
Again, thank you.
Philip Novak
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Mr. Novak,
Thank you for your comments.
Nicole Sauviat Criste
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City of La Quinta
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Subject: Comment on the DEIR for the proposed La Quinta Wavepark development
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August 2, 2021
Attention: Ms. Nicole Sauviat Criste,
Consulting Planner
City of La Quinta
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From: Philip Novak, La Quinta Resident
RE: Noise findings in the DEIR
I wish to criticize the defensibility of the DEIR's position that the proposed Wavepark "will
not have any significant noise impacts" (4.11.7).
The DEIR's Noise conclusions (4.11) are based entirely on a Noise study (Appendix K-1)
carried out by Urban Crossroads' William Lawson. Thus my criticisms are directed to
Lawson's study. My first criticisms address two points in his study of traffic noise. They are
relatively minor points but, if valid, deserve to be amended in the final EIR. My third and
last criticism is major. It calls into serious question the validity of his study of the
Wavepark's projected operational noise.
Criticism 1: An apparent contradiction.
The DEIR's contention that the project will not have any significant traffic noise impacts
appears to directly contradict something Lawson's Noise Study says on p.1 of its own
Executive Summary. Here is Lawson's statement, verbatim:
Based on the significance criteria in outlined in Section 4, the Project -related noise
level increases are considered potentially significant [emphasis Novak's] under Existing
with Project conditions at the following two roadway segments:
• Madison Street north of Avenue 58 (Segment 8)
• Avenue 60 west of Madison Street (Segment 27)
Criticism 2: A baffling and, to me, incomprehensible paragraph in Lawson's Executive
Summary.
Immediately following the passage just quoted above, Lawson states:
All other roadway segments are shown to experience less than significant noise
level impacts under Existing plus Project conditions. However, this scenario is provided
solely for analytical purposes and will not occur, since the Project will not be full [sic]
developed (Phase 1, 2 & 3) and occupied under Existing 2019 conditions. Therefore, no
mitigation measures are considered to reduce the Existing with Project condition traffic
noise level increases, and impacts are considered less than significant since they will not
actually occur. The analysis shows that the unmitigated Project -related traffic noise level
increases under all traffic scenarios will be less than significant. [emphases Novak's].
First, what is it exactly that Lawson is referring to in line 2 as "this scenario"? How
extensive is this supposedly non -occurring scenario?
Second, he says that the "scenario," whatever it is, will not occur. What exactly will
not occur?
Third, in the paragraph's second underlined phrase Lawson tells us again that
something "will not occur," but also that this non -occurring something will carry a
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measurable level of significance (i.e., "none"). How can something non-existent be
measured?
Fourth, in the last sentence Lawson's use of the word "analysis" seems an
overstatement. I suggest it would be far more accurate to describe his activity here as a
thought experiment or a theoretical consideration.
Criticism 3:
Lawson's crucial assumption in studying the La Quinta Wavepark's projected operational
noise — namely, that his audio recording of the Lemoore Surf Ranch's actual operational
noise during a 53-minute period on April 13, 2020 is a fully adequate proxy of what the La
Quinta Wavepark's operational noise (15 hours per day, most days of the years) will be --
is breathtakingly flimsy. He never argues for this assumption, for example, by providing an
appropriately comprehensive account of all the relevant topographical (and many other)
differences and similarities between Lemoore and La Quinta. He just assumes, and
implicitly asks his readers to assume along with him, that Lemoore operational noise is a
fully adequate stand-in for what the La Quinta operational noise is expected to be! Given
the depth of local La Quintan concern over the Project's potential for noise pollution,
Lawson's highly questionable root assumption translates into unacceptably weak grounds
for his opinions about levels of noise. For the LQCC to uncritically embrace Lawson's
highly dubious report about operational noise and thus to overrule La Quintans' noise
concerns would be tantamount to a dereliction of duty.
Further elaboration of Criticism 3. As Lawson begins his report on operational noise he
makes reference to the existence of sensitive noise receivers in La Quinta (ten on -site, ten
nearby off -site) that he used in his study of La Quinta traffic noise. Under the new heading,
"Operational Noise Impacts," he writes:
This section analyzes the potential stationary -source operational noise impacts at
the nearby receiver locations, identified in Section 9, resulting from operation of the
proposed Coral Mountain Specific Plan Project.
What is Lawson talking about here? We all know that no sensitive noise receiver in La
Quinta ever recorded any Wavepark operational noise in La Quinta, for the simple reason
that there is currently no Wavepark operation in La Quinta to make any noise.
In any case, Lawson soon discontinues references to La Quinta receiver locations and, to
his credit, points us to the real source of his operational noise data. He discloses it, mind
you, not in his main text, Appendix K-1, but in his own Appendix to that Appendix, namely
Appendix 10.1. (Does this qualify as burying crucial information in fine print?) Appendix
10.1 is entitled "Reference Noise Levels," a studiously vague but ill -disguised name for
"Lemoore Noise Levels." Lawson finally spells out what his all-important "reference noise
levels" for operational noise are: measurements of the Wave Machine noise (for 53
minutes on April 13, 2020, time -of -day not disclosed) at the "existing Surf Ranch located at
18556 Jackson Avenue in the City of Lemoore, California."
Lawson tells us that the total noise he is out to measure at Lemoore and then "project"
onto La Quinta is the sum of the Lemoore Wave machine noises plus all other site noises,
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characterizing the latter only as "outdoor pool/spa activity, outdoor activity, and
neighborhood commercial land use activity." Neither here nor anywhere else in Lawson's
study could I find any indication that he included measurements of the noise of 4 jet skis
and a loudspeaker (15 hours per day, most days of the year) among his "other site
noises." If Lawson really did omit measuring these noises in trying to project what the La
Quinta Wavepark would sound like, his current conclusions suffer a truly fatal blow and
should not be accepted into the final EIR.
Finally, a minor point, but perhaps important in its own way. Lawson tells us that in order to
logarithmically combine all simultaneous Lemoore noises into a sum total, he plugged his
Lemoore recordings into a Noise Analysis computer program. Has anyone on the LQCC
critically inquired into the scientific standing of this program, whether it has been peer -
reviewed and deemed reliable, whether it's been adequately field-tested, or whether this
was perhaps the program's maiden voyage? Can we trust its output on such a crucial
issue? I ask because of something I thought I heard G. Simon say at the LQCC meeting
of July 20, 2021, namely that Lawson's computer program is the brainchild of his retired
rocket -scientist (and presumably tech -hobbyist) dad. This wouldn't mean it can't be a great
program but isn't some extra due diligence required here?
Philip Novak, Professor Emeritus
Dept. of Philosophy and Religion
Dominican University of California
novak@dominican.edu
cc: Linda Evans, Mayor, levans@laquintaca.gov
Robert Radi, Mayor Pro Tem, rradi@laquintaca.gov.
Kathleen Fitzpatrick, Council Member, kfitzpatrick@laquintaca.gov
John Pena, Council Member, jpena@laquintaca.gov
Steve Sanchez, Council Member, ssanchez@laquintaca.gov
Cherri Flores, Planning Manager, cdd@la-quinta.org
Carlos Flores, Senior Planner, cdd@la-quinta.org
Siji Fernandez, Associate Planner, cdd@la-quinta.org
Diane Rebryna, drebryna@telusplanet.net
Derek Wong, derekwong745@yahoo.com
Ramon Baez, rfbaez7@gmail.com
Kathy Weiss, kathy@crystalspringsranch.co
Bridgett Novak, bnovak26@comcast.net
Philip Novak, Professor Emeritus
Dept. of Philosophy and Religion
Dominican University of California
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